Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tho'natu

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Tho'natu

• Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 21:34, November 7, 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: What is Jujiggum doing? These noms aren't FotJ!

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. I can't decide whether to sigh with relief or gasp at this blasphemy! SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 23:30, November 7, 2009 (UTC)
2. Strange not seeing a FotJ article from you, Jonny. :P JangFett ^(Talk) 22:38, November 8, 2009 (UTC)
3. A return to where your GA career began :). Grunny ^(Talk) 04:53, November 10, 2009 (UTC)
   • Ah, memories :'-) Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 12:59, November 10, 2009 (UTC)
4. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 01:25, November 15, 2009 (UTC)
5. Perhaps he later became a Hidden One. Or a member of Galactic Alliance Security. :p Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 00:22, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
6. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:19, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Toprawa:
   • I'm having trouble figuring out what this sentence is trying to say about Bane being healed. The reference is lost on me. Please reword for clarity, and see if you can't do something to remove the semicolon as well. It just reads awkwardly overall: "Unbeknownst to the Jedi, Darth Zannah had hidden herself and her Master, Darth Bane—the Sith Lord to whom the message actually referred—after Bane had been healed; and then driven Darovit insane."
     • Does this work? I removed the healing reference as it wasn't fully necessary, as I would have to add extraneous detail about Bane's injury and Caleb.
       • Works fine. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:19, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
   • Same kind of objection. The reference to this event is lost on me. You speak of "the" explosion as though I'm supposed to have prior knowledge of what happened. Please reword to clarify, and please try to avoid this in the future: "Before the Seventh Battle of Ruusan, however, Tho'natu was assigned to Jedi Master Valenthyne Farfalla's gunship, the Fairwind, and thus survived the catastrophic detonation of the thought bomb." Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:27, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
     • Addressed, thanks for the review. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 02:28, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:19, November 20, 2009 (UTC)