Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/The Clone Wars: Headgames (second nomination)

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The Clone Wars: Headgames

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 05:33, September 14, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I've done some tweaking to this and would like to give a shot at restoring this to GA status.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Fan26 (Talk) 17:32, October 19, 2018 (UTC)
  2. Nice work. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:35, October 23, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 15:01, December 18, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:01, December 22, 2018 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:35, December 24, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • "As the droids approach the fabricated bunker through a canyon" Is the bunker prefab? Neither the article nor the bunker's article says anything in either way save the above sentence. If so it should be changed to prefabricated. If not, it should be removed, considering that by the definition of fabricated, every bunker would be a fabricated one. Fan26 (Talk) 01:38, October 19, 2018 (UTC)
    • "Fabricated" here was used as a synonym for "fake," not as a form of "prefab." I have made some changes to the wording to alleviate the confusion. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 12:43, October 19, 2018 (UTC)
    • ah, because the bunker was built solely for the trap, I see. Fan26 (Talk) 17:31, October 19, 2018 (UTC)
"The Clone Wars: Impgames"
  • Appearances is missing Lekku/Legends. Please check if anything else should be listed. Imperators II(Talk) 23:08, October 25, 2018 (UTC)
    • Added a couple more things. Should be all, unless we want to list stuff like Limb, Eye and of course, Breast. Which I doubt is necessary. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 17:42, October 27, 2018 (UTC)
      • I think we should. Comprehensively listing appearances of any in-universe subjects can potentially be beneficial to both readers and editors. Imperators II(Talk) 14:20, October 28, 2018 (UTC)
        • If you say so. But I still think this is silly. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 15:14, October 28, 2018 (UTC)
  • Can you see about rewording the lead intro sentence? It reads super redundant. Imperators II(Talk) 23:26, November 1, 2018 (UTC)
  • Is the "tagline" the thing written on the title page? If so, why are you not following that page's capitalization of the line? Imperators II(Talk) 23:48, November 6, 2018 (UTC)
  • Refs 5 and 10 are bad. So is the first Bibliography item. Imperators II(Talk) 23:16, November 12, 2018 (UTC)
  • In Appearances, should Inc go into double quotes, as well? Imperators II(Talk) 23:16, November 12, 2018 (UTC)
  • I think you should also note Tom Hodges as the colorist in the infobox. Imperators II(Talk) 23:16, November 12, 2018 (UTC)
  • I'm afraid the date ref is incomplete. If the only thing known about "The Clone Wars: Headgames" was that it takes place prior to "Jedi Crash," it could just as easily take place in 23 BBY, or 24 BBY, or... if you get my meaning. Imperators II(Talk) 23:16, November 12, 2018 (UTC)
  • Uh, 22 BBY is infobox-exclusive. Imperators II(Talk) 11:58, December 7, 2018 (UTC)
  • Looking at the comic, there's actually no indication the events are set on a distinct planet. Saying that "an unidentified planet" was targeted by the CIS is pretty speculative. The only canonical things we know is that there was an information bunker set in a canyon. Please reword the first paragraph to reflect this. Imperators II(Talk) 17:47, December 13, 2018 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Is it "The Clone Wars: Headgames" or The Clone Wars: Headgames? The intro and infobox don't even agree. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk)
    • Comic stories use quotes, so it's the former. Adjusted the infobox usage accordingly. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 08:07, December 20, 2018 (UTC)
      • After an IRC discussion, the formatting has been changed to italics throughout. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 07:34, December 21, 2018 (UTC)
  • A few things regarding the TPB:
    • The Star Wars: Tales from the Clone Wars info is technically exclusive to the intro and should be mentioned in the article body somewhere.
    • It would seem that TPB could also be linked in the "published in" field in the infobox
    • With respect to its release in that TPB, it would seem Dark Horse and Dreams & Visions Press should also be listed among the publishers in the infobox, since they produced the TPB in collaboration with SW.com. All of this should also be mentioned in the article body. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:03, December 22, 2018 (UTC)
      • All done. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 12:21, December 22, 2018 (UTC)
        • Ok, I opted to list SW.com first in the infobox field, since it was originally their publication and the others were secondary. I also added in an image of the TPB for that section, which looks nicer than just the Imagecat template. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:01, December 22, 2018 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • You inconsistently refer to the tactical droid as "it" and "he". Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:45, December 23, 2018 (UTC)
  • It should be mentioned somewhere in the article that this is part of the Legends continuity. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:45, December 23, 2018 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:48, December 24, 2018 (UTC)