Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Thar'quan

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Thar'quan

• Nominated by: Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:31, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Gimme some air ← and this is the reason why I'm nominating this. Serious.

(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 08:36, December 1, 2009 (UTC)
2. Better the Defel you know than the one you don't. ~ SavageBob 22:18, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
3. LtNOWIS 20:02, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
4. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 18:23, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
5. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 02:38, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
6. Grunny ^(Talk) 03:10, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Soresu
   • I have noticed that in a number of previous noms and also some of your current ones, the intro has not been sufficiently long. Please make it bigger. Check your other noms for the same problem. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 07:55, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
     • Try now. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:17, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
   • other scars due to his work with Rebel agent Sasnak Toxis while working for Hctaqsas Metals. Work/working a little repetitive. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 09:59, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
     • I love Thesaurus. Look now. Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:27, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
2. Prepare to be savaged...
   • "favoring the Rebel network on nearby Sriluur." Can you explain what you mean by "favoring"?
     • Oh, yep. Done now. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 21:43, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
   • I think a lot of the information in the second paragraph of "Biography" might better fit under "Personality and traits". A list of his scars and the fact that he showed them off seems more P&T'ish to me, for example. Nevertheless, the list of operations during which he received the injuries belongs instead under "Biography". In the end, you may have to repeat some information in both sections, but that's fine.
   • Does the book he first appeared in have a single author or a couple of authors? It might be good to note who created the character. Otherwise, looks solid! ~ SavageBob 01:17, December 5, 2009 (UTC)
     • Done, done and, well, improved to the best of my skill.--Skippy Farlstendoiro 21:24, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
       • I'm still unsure what the "favoring" part means, though. ~ SavageBob 22:25, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:10, January 12, 2010 (UTC)