Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tenko

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Tenko

  • Nominated by: MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 20:44, November 12, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: More for the barn-burner and Project:GB.

(4 ACs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Fred's Project GB vs My Operation Battlegrounds. Who will write more articles!! :P Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 21:17, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Nice job. Both of you write more articles. WP:VG wants more GB articles. :P —Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 17:50, November 20, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:06, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 23:25, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 14:52, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Assuming Menkooroo is satisfied. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 01:36, January 20, 2013 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Menkooroo (talk) 03:37, January 27, 2013 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • In the intro say that Otoh Langua did not steal the staff. Also in the intro just have Gungan Grand army pipelinked to Grand army, since we obviously know its already Gungan.
    • Done.
  • Just for the sake of having more images you could put the one of Tenko in Otoh Jahai in the bio. That's all other than my comment :) Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 06:39, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • Thanks for the review! MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 16:49, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
Return of the Jedi
Tenko
  • Is the war of the Gungan tribes only dated to "around" 3000 BBY in the Atlas? If so, I recommend changing ref note [2] from "at this time" to "around this time" in this article, Gallo, and all other related articles. Gallo's biography also says "sometime prior to the war between the Gungan tribes in 3,000 BBY (emphasis mine)." That should be revised. Yeah, that's right. I didn't think I had objected enough to Gallo's FAN, so I left another one here. ;)
    • The Atlas says the war is during the year 3,000 BBY.
      • Right you are. The intro and the bio both say "around," though, which should be fixed. Menkooroo (talk) 12:47, December 30, 2012 (UTC)
        • Well, the Atlas places the war at this time, but it says nothing about it ending the same year. How should I go about that?
          • Since the Atlas explicitly states that the war is "in" 3000 BBY (a clash between Gungan bosses in 3000 BBY), there's really no ambiguity. You can just date everything to 3000 BBY. Menkooroo (talk) 15:19, January 3, 2013 (UTC)
            • Done.
  • Gimme a bio quote.
    • Added.
      • It's the same as the article's leading quote... o_O
        • Pretend that didn't happen. :P I decided to bring the PT quote up to the top instead. Those are the only two good quotes about/from Tenko. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 18:21, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
  • "Tenko agreed to halt attacks on Otoh Langua..." if those attacks were happening before Gallo approached him, they should be mentioned at the beginning of the bio.
    • Addendum: Code-8 tells me (in Hantic's GAnom) that the game doesn't actually mention any attacks --- can you confirm or deny? Menkooroo (talk) 01:07, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
      • Gallo says the tribes are fighting each other. Then when he talks to Tenko, Tenko says he will talk peace only if Gallo returns their staff. Hantic, Boss of the people Tenko claims stole the staff, then says he refuses to stop fighting until you give him resources. Therefore, the two cities /were/ fighting each other. Also, Marsune states that the cities have been fighting for a long time. —Unsigned comment by Master Fredcerique (talk • contribs)
        • Cool. Back to the original objection, then --- if the cities have been fighting for a long time, I'd like to see it mentioned at the beginning of the bio. Menkooroo (talk) 05:20, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
          • How's that work?
            • Good stuff. Just take care of the quote objection above and we'll call it a day. Also, should "oursa" be one word or two? Menkooroo (talk) 08:31, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
              • It's one word. The quote is captioned in the game. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 18:21, January 26, 2013 (UTC)
  • Can you mention in the BTS that he's represented in-game by a generic boss icon that also represents a buncha other characters? Seems noteworthy. Menkooroo (talk) 03:51, December 17, 2012 (UTC)
    • Mentioned.
  • And one more: Can you mention in the BTS that the voice actor wasn't credited? Menkooroo (talk) 01:12, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
    • Mentioned.

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 03:58, January 27, 2013 (UTC)


  • There isn't a voice actor listed in the Bts, but I don't actually know if there is a credited one despite going through the cast list multiple times. Although thinking about it, the credits have two people who voiced Gungan villagers 1 and 2, and considering that the Prima guide doesn't name Tenko either its likely to be one of them, which one it is could take some working out. The two voice actors are Rob Paulsen and Grey DeLisle. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 06:39, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
    • Yeah, the credits say nothing about who did the voicing for Tenko, and we can't assume that either of the actors for the villagers also portrayed Tenko. There's really nothing to add. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 16:45, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
      • The best I can come up with is that there is one Gungan villager who talks in the first level, and Tenko would be the next one and the same voice was probably used for the other bosses in that level. However we probably need something a lot more concrete than that. Commander Code-8 To say hi, press 42 21:17, November 13, 2012 (UTC)