- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Telettoh
- Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 21:40, March 7, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: For WP:KOTOR!
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
Nice work. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 05:57, March 10, 2013 (UTC)- 501st dogma(talk) 00:25, March 13, 2013 (UTC)
- Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 20:37, March 25, 2013 (UTC) 
Cade Calrayn 18:37, March 26, 2013 (UTC)- Supreme Emperor (talk) 18:46, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
Object
501st
Could you maybe explain about Demagol, who you link to. This would be good as you have "Demagol" in the image caption.Hair color and skin color should be add to the P&T.Otherwise, good work. 501st dogma(talk) 22:21, March 12, 2013 (UTC)- Please take a look.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 22:46, March 12, 2013 (UTC)
- Also, I added a couple subsections and quotes, please tell me how it looks.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 23:01, March 12, 2013 (UTC)
- Please take a look.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 22:46, March 12, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
What was Golliard doing at Ottega? And Carrick for that matter since he drops into the narrative.As they were in transit to the planet Osadia, Telettoh had a discussion with Carrick, Marn Hierogryph, and Rohlan Dyre—who escaped Republic authorities with Carrick and Hierogryph's aid[2] - the last we heard of Dyre, he's being impersonated by Demagol. You mention nothing about the real Dyre's status, so saying he escaped without a set-up needs to be explained. Also mentioning he is the "real" Dyre would be nice for clarity.- Sir Cavalier of One(Squadron channel) 11:47, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
- Both taken care of, I think. The second objection might be a little clunky, please let me know if you think so.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 19:35, March 20, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:08, March 27, 2013 (UTC)