Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Tayan falcon

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Tayan falcon

• Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 18:11, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: CAnom that went over the word limit

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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:47, 19 February 2021 (UTC)
2. Zed42 (talk) 09:07, 27 February 2021 (UTC)
3. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:59, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
4. A genuinely interesting and engaging read. Nice work. Tommy-Macaroni 21:48, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
5. Really enjoyed how this article was written. Nicely done. MasterFred(talk) 22:23, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

Object

Zed

• Does the source establish that llaya were actually part of their diet? The infobox claims as such, but the body only states that the falcons scared away the llaya. Zed42 (talk) 21:18, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
  • The falcons just scared the llaya away. Good catch. VergenceScatter (talk) 21:53, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
• The History section seems a little out of order. I think the falcons' significance in Doellinism should be mentioned first for context, and then include the information about imagery.
• The Tayan League being socialist is intro-exclusive and should be mentioned in the body.
• The link to Star Wars Roleplaying Game is currently incorrect, as that is the WotC system. You should also specify that Strongholds of Resistance is an expansion for Star Wars: Age of Rebellion. Zed42 (talk) 19:42, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
  • All addressed. VergenceScatter (talk) 20:13, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
• The intro and body currently contain conflicting information about the falcons' association with Doellinism. The intro states that they were avatars of Taya, while the body states that both the falcon and Taya were avatars of Doellin but otherwise only shared a name. Which of these is correct? Zed42 (talk) 20:51, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
  • They're both avatars of Doellin. It should be fixed now. VergenceScatter (talk) 21:25, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

Erebus

• I think you can add that the falcon shared its name with Taya in the intro. Erebus Chronus (talk) 19:35, 11 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. VergenceScatter (talk) 20:41, 11 February 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:23, 4 March 2021 (UTC)