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Tava

  • Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi Seventh Fleet (Syndicure) 19:28, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: CAN that needed a stepstool
  • Date Archived: 16:44, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 318 words (59 introduction, 238 body, 21 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:CHISS WP:Novels

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Fan26 (Talk) 02:56, 9 May 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote copy-edit —spookywillowwtalk 02:09, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
  3. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:52, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 08:14, 19 June 2023 (UTC)
  5. Lewisr (talk) 13:59, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

Object

Samonic
  • Review note: my copy-edit.
  • The History section is too small for that image, you'll have to split up the paragraph or remove the image.
  • The Chiss Senior Captain Mitth'raw'nuruodo, core name "Thrawn," used tava a number of times against his enemies to gain an advantage against them. — I know that the intro shouldn't be too long, but can you try to mention where, when, and against whom he used it?
  • Quote: A couple of them let off the stuff in class once just to see everyone act like drooling moon-brains. I'd mention this in the History section.
  • A small canister of tava was enough to fill the cockpit of a ship. I'd specify that it was enough to fill a Vak patrol boat's cockpit since you're linking to that page.
  • Why is tava, a gas, in Category:Chiss Ascendancy technology? :P Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 11:06, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
    • All addressed via Discord. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 17:51, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
Fan
  • I think you can throw in the Ascendancy Trilogy-era image of Thrawn in the history section Fan26 (Talk) 00:46, 9 May 2023 (UTC)
    • had one originally but removed it per objections, not really enough space BloodOfIrizi Seventh Fleet (Syndicure) 01:36, 9 May 2023 (UTC)
      • scratch that, added. realized it didnt fit because of a fandom bug making section lines cut through images and captions BloodOfIrizi Seventh Fleet (Syndicure) 01:39, 9 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 16:44, 19 June 2023 (UTC)