- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Tarr Seirr
- Nominated by: Kreivi Wolter 16:14, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Lets try this out.
(0 ACs/2 Users/2 Total)
Support
- Good now! :) Skippy Farlstendoiro 15:47, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
- Oll Korrect! ~ SavageBob 19:21, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
Object
- The Grand Master
- Please check your grammar throughout the article.
- Missing P&a section.
- Yeah, actually I tried to write that, but it was awfully short. There really isn't much fact to put on that.--Kreivi Wolter 20:30, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
- The section is required by the LG. If there's anything that can be put there, it should be there. His Force-sensitvity and any particular Force Powers that he exhibited, the fact that he was skilled enough to became a Knight, his skill with a lightsaber, and any other skills he may have possessed can and should be mentioned here. Even if the secion is very small, it is required.
- Good now?--Kreivi Wolter 21:58, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
- Please check your grammar. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 17:39, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
- Good now?--Kreivi Wolter 21:58, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
- The section is required by the LG. If there's anything that can be put there, it should be there. His Force-sensitvity and any particular Force Powers that he exhibited, the fact that he was skilled enough to became a Knight, his skill with a lightsaber, and any other skills he may have possessed can and should be mentioned here. Even if the secion is very small, it is required.
- Yeah, actually I tried to write that, but it was awfully short. There really isn't much fact to put on that.--Kreivi Wolter 20:30, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
- More to come. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 19:01, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
- Skippy vs the Cerean guy
Early life: During the growing Separatist Crisis, members of the Council found themselves too occupied, and Mundi relinquished his position as Watchman to Seirr, who had also became a Jedi Knight. This part could be improved using a chronological order: Seirr became a Knight; then Separatist Crisis; then Mundi relinquished Watchmanship, then Seirr is promoted to Watchman.- Good now? Kreivi Wolter 15:40, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
Attack on Hypori: General Daakman Barrek uncovered Add more context: Mention that Barrek was a Jedi, or the reader could assume that Barrek was Separatist.- Good now? Kreivi Wolter 15:40, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
Final duel: Are you sure K'Kruhk was a Jedi Master at this point? Because I am not so sure at all. Can you source that particular word, or remove it?- Good now? Kreivi Wolter 15:40, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
- Skippy Farlstendoiro 12:35, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
- Prepare to be savaged...
I'm pretty sure nothing should be linked in quotes unless such links are not repeated in the article proper. More to come, but looks good. ~ SavageBob 07:01, December 6, 2009 (UTC)- Roger roger. Kreivi Wolter 09:08, December 8, 2009 (UTC)
Comments
- If someone knows the source that identifes him as general, then please tell me.Kreivi Wolter 20:30, November 28, 2009 (UTC)
- And if someone knows which source first identifies him as Tarr Seirr, please tell that one too. Im not sure is it his Databank entry. Kreivi Wolter 13:11, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
Vote to remove nomination (AC only)
Unaddressed objections for 3 weeks. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 18:05, December 20, 2009 (UTC)- CC7567 (talk) 18:23, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:37, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 19:58, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
