Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Suudaa Nem'ro's disease

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Suudaa Nem'ro's disease

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 18:03, April 12, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project Hero celebrates the release of Rise of the Hutt Cartel with a Hutt-themed article!

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 04:22, April 14, 2013 (UTC)
2. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 23:31, April 21, 2013 (UTC)
3. 501st dogma^(talk) 16:30, May 4, 2013 (UTC)
4. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:39, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
5. Nice work, as usual. MasterFred^(Whatever) 04:34, May 17, 2013 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

1. The disease doesn't seem to get properly introduced in the desciption.
   • Done.
2. You couldn't have waited for BB6 to nom this? :) Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 23:18, April 12, 2013 (UTC)
   • Meh! Cade Calrayn 23:31, April 12, 2013 (UTC)

Floyd

• "Nem'ro was cured by the xenopathologist Archiban Kimble, who had studied the disease while in medical school and was able to develop a treatment using the chemicals ardanium, accellerite, and cyanogen silicate, but the Houk bounty hunter Skadge killed Nem'ro before reporters from the Journal of Xenomedicine could verify Doc's achievement." This sentence drags on too long. Really, I think the parts about Doc developing a treatment and Skadge killing Nem'ro should go in different sentences. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:16, April 15, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 00:41, April 15, 2013 (UTC)

501st

• Does Doc get paid in the end?
  • It's never said.
• Could you give context on Quesh and Nar Shadda in the bts? 501st dogma^(talk) 15:48, May 4, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 16:28, May 4, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:34, May 17, 2013 (UTC)