Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Suribran Tu

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Suribran Tu

Nominated by: Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 23:54, February 24, 2011 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Don't you just love to escape all this frightening real-world stuff about terrible dictators and violent uprisings? That's why we have Star Wars, right?

Objection/question. The intro states that he killed a considerable number of his own people, while the bio states that he ordered political assassinations to maintain power. Those two don't necessarily seem analogous to one another, and I feel like either the intro should be revised to more closely reflect the bio's wording, or the bio should have something added to it reflecting the intro's wording. Up to you, depending on which is more correct. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:15, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
- I added a bit to the intro to clarify that the deaths were the result of the political assassinations. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 23:39, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
  - That's fine. Part of what I was after was reflecting in both the magnitude/amount of killings, which the intro does better than the bio, so I've added "many" to the bio description. So I hope that works. Please tweak as appropriate. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:02, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

~~Tu's political title should be mentioned in the intro.~~
That's all. Good work. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 21:39, March 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Done. Thanks for looking it over. Darth Trayus^{(Trayus Academy)} 03:45, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:52, March 4, 2011 (UTC)