Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sturm Umbrik

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Sturm Umbrik

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:14, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 09:47, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 378 words (68 introduction, 268 body, 42 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 378 words (68 introduction, 268 body, 42 behind the scenes)
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(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Fan26 (Talk) 18:36, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 04:37, 1 February 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 09:45, 12 February 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:46, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
  5. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 08:58, 13 March 2023 (UTC)

Object

Spooky
  • Would like to confirm if Servit's ancestor is female after the recent CT rules; I see she/her pronouns used in the quote provided on that CA, but as I don't have the story, cannot check to confirm explicit gender confirmation. Affects this article specifically as it refers to the ancestor as a female individual a few times in the prose; thought I'd check in.—spookywillowwtalk 01:28, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Had forgotten about her, done. Unfortunately not any other way to describe her, as you'll see. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:01, 1 February 2023 (UTC)
Luca
  • I think Shara'Tam can be added to "|death=" in the infobox.
    • Added.
  • The pronouns category is missing.
    • Added.
  • "the EX droid became highly sought-after as Servit […] accidentally showed it to a crew…" This sentence is a bit confusing, as it seems that the droid became sought-after because Servit showed it to them, but I assume that's not the case. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 17:08, 8 February 2023 (UTC)
    • Well, Dex says that people knew about the droid and treasure, but he doesn't say that people were actively looking for it before Servit revealed that he had it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:02, 8 February 2023 (UTC)
      • Makes sense, thanks for the clarification. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 09:45, 12 February 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:47, 13 March 2023 (UTC)