- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Strom Dubrok
- Nominated by: grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 11:11, September 26, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(3 ACs/3 Users/6 Total)
Support
Menkooroo 12:13, September 26, 2011 (UTC)- Clone Commander Lee Talk 17:37, September 26, 2011 (UTC)
- Hanzo Hasashi 15:33, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
- --Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 23:34, September 27, 2011 (UTC) 
Grand Moff Tranner 
(Comlink) 18:20, October 1, 2011 (UTC)- 1358 (Talk) 19:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Legacy!
It's probably best to make a note of his hair and eye colour in Personality and traits. These days, any infobox-exclusive info gets you a round in the chokey.- Haha true, and done.
Can you make a note of where Strom and Gial are when Strom confronts him?- Done.
I know that it's difficult with articles this short, but as the intro is almost as long as the bio, is there anything in the intro that could go? Maybe the context on the war. Your call; I'm good either way.Fantastic job. Menkooroo 11:35, September 26, 2011 (UTC)- Cut. I was tossing up whether to include that or not, but erred on the side of caution and included it. I can always replace if anyone objects. Couldn't think of anything else to cut, but am open to any ideas. Thanks for the review :-). grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 12:00, September 26, 2011 (UTC)
Moffship
The third sentence of the intro seems a little disconnected from the rest of the paragraph. Perhaps you could add something along the lines of "During Dubrok's time at the shipyards" to the beginning of it?- Done.
As a strong opponent of one-sentence paragraphs (:p), could you either make the first paragraph of the bio a little larger, or incorporate it into the other paragraph?- Done.
- That's all. Nice job, Grunny. Always nice to see an Ambition-Legacy crossover. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 15:33, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. Figured it's been a while since I did one (or any GA for that matter :P). :-) grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 21:55, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
The lead quote's second line, should the "you" start with a capital Y? You never know with these comics so thought I'd ask.:P 1358 (Talk)¨- Bah, typo :P. Good catch, and fixed :). grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 07:58, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 19:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
- Placing this down here, since I don't know very much about Legacy, but does there happen to be a quote for the P&T section? --Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 23:34, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
- Not really. He only appears on one page, and the quotes I have added for the intro and bio are from one conversation. The only other line he has is "Nonetheless—", then he's cut off by Gial. :) grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 01:12, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Heh, okay. Just wanted to check.--Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 13:12, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Heh, okay. Just wanted to check.--Cal Jedi
- Not really. He only appears on one page, and the quotes I have added for the intro and bio are from one conversation. The only other line he has is "Nonetheless—", then he's cut off by Gial. :) grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 01:12, September 28, 2011 (UTC)