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Stormwind
- Nominated by: Dropbearemma (she/her) 11:51, 14 March 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: This only appears on p. 41 of The Truce at Bakura Sourcebook.
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My copy-edit. Please take care with linking in future nominations. UberSoldat93 
(talk) 12:34, 28 March 2022 (UTC)- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:57, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 05:58, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
- I've changed some of the lines cited to CSWE to better reflect the info presented there. OOM 224 15:24, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:08, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
Object
Braha'wind
Context needed for the Virgillian Free Alignment in both the intro and history.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:33, 20 March 2022 (UTC)- Is that any better? I'm not really sure how to make them less repetitive. Dropbearemma (she/her) 13:06, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
- I've made a tweak in the history section here. Just to make sure you're all fine and dandy with that? Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:26, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
- Do you think it implies that the VFA are fighting the Aristocracy 'because' the Aristocracy is pro-Imperial or am I interpreting it in an unintuitive way? The VFA is definitely anti-Imperial, but the reasons they're fighting the Aristocracy (not that we know what they are!) pre-date the Empire. Dropbearemma (she/her) 14:19, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
- It depends if you reckon the text is trying to imply that much. I think the two factions having different governmental (pro and anti Imperial) alignments would definitely maintain their rivalry. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:38, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- Fair! I'm fine with the edit, then! Dropbearemma (she/her) 11:39, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- It depends if you reckon the text is trying to imply that much. I think the two factions having different governmental (pro and anti Imperial) alignments would definitely maintain their rivalry. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:38, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- Do you think it implies that the VFA are fighting the Aristocracy 'because' the Aristocracy is pro-Imperial or am I interpreting it in an unintuitive way? The VFA is definitely anti-Imperial, but the reasons they're fighting the Aristocracy (not that we know what they are!) pre-date the Empire. Dropbearemma (she/her) 14:19, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
- I've made a tweak in the history section here. Just to make sure you're all fine and dandy with that? Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:26, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
- Is that any better? I'm not really sure how to make them less repetitive. Dropbearemma (she/her) 13:06, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:08, 29 April 2022 (UTC)