Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Stingfly (Chiss light cruiser)

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Stingfly (Chiss light cruiser)

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi^(Syndicure) 17:59, 6 April 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: the Whisperbird's sister ship
• Date Archived: 11:16, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 475 words (97 introduction, 356 body, 22 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Chiss WP:Novels

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Support

1. Additional objections handled via Discord.—spookywilloww^talk 23:51, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
2. Did some copy-edits Fan26 (Talk) 04:28, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
3. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:37, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 10:47, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
5. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 11:10, 10 June 2023 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• (Review note) Here's a few preliminary objections. Just took a very quick look before you address them since one of them is "big."
• Seems like the page could use some rewording, some parts are identical to Whisperbird.
• "over the planet nicknamed Sunrise against the forces of the Grysk species led by Jixtus" — I'd reword this to over the planet "Sunrise" against the forces of the Grysk operative "Jixtus" to shorten the intro.
• Missing a Commanders and crew section. Samonic ^(Talk) 19:18, 6 April 2023 (UTC)
  • hows that? BloodOfIrizi^(Syndicure) 20:17, 6 April 2023 (UTC)
• Timelines update.
• Does Lesser Evil state that the Stingfly's hull specifically was made from nyix-alloy? I'm not seeing anything.
• Electrostatic barriers go in the othersystems parameter. Also, the article's Description says the Stingfly was equipped with electrostatic barriers and the infobox says that it was equipped with a electrostatic barrier. Which is correct?
• Category:Chiss starships is a subcategory of Category:Chiss Ascendancy. Also, shouldn't Category:Chiss Ascendancy military be Chiss Expansionary Defense Fleet? Samonic ^(Talk) 09:09, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
  • done. as for the nyix-alloy hull, during the nomination process of Whisperbird we came to consensus that all chiss ships used nyix-alloy hulls BloodOfIrizi^(Syndicure) 18:45, 8 April 2023 (UTC)

spookly

• I'm seeing two back to back sentences in the intro starting with 'In x BBY,'—might be possible to vary that a bit. Given the article size, another sentence or two could also be tucked in to buff out the intro's length a small bit.
• Category:Light cruisers?—spookywilloww^talk 00:51, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
  • amended and added BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 01:34, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
  • wait oops i didnt add more to the intro ill grab that tmrw morning BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 03:38, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
    • added some, dont see anything else worth adding in the intro tbh BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 15:48, 28 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 11:11, 10 June 2023 (UTC)