Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Stellar Halo

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Stellar Halo

  • Nominated by: Pentastar patrol 501st dogma(talk) 20:14, April 27, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(2 ACs/4 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 08:31, May 1, 2012 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 01:00, May 22, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 01:18, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
  4. Ran it through a copy-edit here. Otherwise, it's not bad. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 18:52, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
  5. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 19:47, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
  6. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:27, June 5, 2012 (UTC)
  7. ACvote Please review the changes I made in my copy-edit and make sure you understand the reasons behind them. I'd be happy to answer any questions you have about them. CC7567 (talk) 22:13, June 10, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • The Stellar Halo was a battlecruiser part of the Imperial aligned Kuati Sector Forces as of 8.5 ABY: Sounds kind of akward, can you reword this?
    • Better?
  • Maybe make it clearer that the ship was destroyed when sent in the sun.
    • Done.
  • The Galactic Civil War is intro-exclusive.
    • Fixed, sorry about that.
  • Context for the Luminous.
    • Contexted it and the event horizon.
  • Good work. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:58, April 29, 2012 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review. Pentastar patrol 501st dogma(talk) 11:40, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:13, June 10, 2012 (UTC)