Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Steel Fist

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Steel Fist

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:04, 7 September 2008 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: To go with Kolig below.

(+5)

Support

1. - Kingpin13^{Cantina Battle Ground} 14:14, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
2. Graestan^(Talk) 21:11, 14 September 2008 (UTC)
3. ...Or particularly this one, which was one I was looking forward to. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:46, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
4. Darth Xadún^{(Consult the Holocron)} 19:20, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir 14:42, 18 September 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

1. Kingpin:
   • You say "the vessel" a lot in the intro, could this be substituted?
     • Some instances changed.
   • You haven’t got any tags on the appearances and sources, are these needed?
     • Added.
   • Also see my second objection to Kolig, I presume you don't have information on what happened next but I'll ask anyway - Kingpin13^{Cantina Battle Ground} 14:00, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
     • Context added. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:11, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
2. Toprawa:
   • I'd like to see the crewmembers infobox field listed alphabetically, unless there's a reason for listing them in the order that you have? Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:55, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
     • No reason for their order. Adjusted to alphabetical list.
   • Also, I would like to see some kind of mention in the Description section of the ship's hyperdrive capabilities and how both the hyperdrive rating and the length of the ship are apparently different from the standard YT-1300 model. I don't know if you could necessarily attribute these differences to modification without speculating, but at the very least, an explanation of this discrepancy should be made. Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:14, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
     • Nice catch - I hadn't even noticed the length discrepancy. Tried to put a decent description in without speculating, but I think the length issue could be put down to the rear engine configuration. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 08:17, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
       • Please also mention the hyperdrive discrepancy. Also, it would be best to source the 34.75-meter length to something external. Just use whatever our article sources it to. Toprawa and Ralltiir 14:29, 18 September 2008 (UTC)

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