Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Star of Alderaan

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Star of Alderaan

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:07, 14 January 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 20:40, 6 February 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 401 words (59 introduction, 293 body, 49 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:FFGAMES WP:DEF

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 04:19, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 00:38, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:58, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 20:39, 6 February 2024 (UTC)

Object

Anil

• Alderaan is only identified as a planet in an image caption, the article body should also provide context for it. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:20, 14 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Added. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:22, 16 January 2024 (UTC)

Uber

• As we discussed on Mantooine Medallion, please remove the sectioning here and for Illudium Star.
  • Removed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:33, 15 January 2024 (UTC)
• Need an Illudium disambiguation page. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:45, 14 January 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• Alderaan needs context in the intro as well Lewisr (talk) 23:42, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:23, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
• Would the sentence about when the medal was in use be better in a history section? Lewisr (talk) 23:42, 17 January 2024 (UTC)
  • I thought about it and tbh I think it's too little information to warrant a section. For example, Interdictor-class has one sentence in the role section but it's a long sentence. In this case it would only be a few words and I think it would disrupt the structure of the article and flow of reading. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 01:23, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Fair enough, do you think there's maybe a way to mention it a bit earlier in the section in that case? Lewisr (talk) 02:21, 18 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Reworded and placed at beginning of section --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 03:23, 18 January 2024 (UTC)

CC-8

• The last two sentences of the intro should be split up or rephrased so they don't have identical openings
  • I combined them --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:27, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
• The second sentence of the description section should be split up Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:12, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Split --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:27, 27 January 2024 (UTC)
    • You changed the first sentence :P still looks better that way Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:57, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Ah, I see. Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:57, 28 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:39, 6 February 2024 (UTC)