Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Stansun

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Stansun

Nominated by: Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 18:05, May 30, 2012 (UTC)
Nomination comments: Great personality but the beard is ridiculous on a cop...

Cade Calrayn 16:35, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:14, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 22:12, June 16, 2012 (UTC)
Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 21:57, July 2, 2012 (UTC)
Good work.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 16:57, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
He's going with the Abe Lincoln. Keepin' it classy. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 02:05, July 10, 2012 (UTC)

~~In the intro and body, I would mention that the individual was affiliated with the Republic.~~
- Done.
  - I was refering to the individual hired by Stansun, sorry for being unclear on that.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 12:23, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
    - Ah, corrected.
That's all, good work (And the beard does look ridiculous.)--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:40, May 31, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks :) Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 04:29, June 1, 2012 (UTC)
~~One quick question: Does the player return to Stansun for a reward? If the player returns I think you should mention it in the body of the article.~~--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 12:23, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 13:31, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

Trayus, Bob, and I have developed a new system of references with help from Ecks. See {{TORcite}} for how to use it—this mission's a heroic, I think, so it'd be {{TORcite|type=heroic|The Face Merchants|Coruscant}}... which gives Star Wars: The Old Republic—Mission: [Heroic] "The Face Merchants" on Coruscant.
- Ok.
Even with the CSF seemingly loosing the battle, Stansun remained determined to keep pressing on." For one thing, you have an extra o in losing. Also, the end is kind of wonky... I'd say "remained determined to press on".
- Done.
~~Also, since it's a heroic, I'm pretty sure you should refer to the players as a group of individuals. At least 2, since it's a Heroic 2+. Cade Calrayn 17:55, June 2, 2012 (UTC)~~
- I would disagree since I was able to finish it on my own. Also any mission can be completed with a two or more persons but we continue to only mention one player when describing them in a mission. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 13:31, June 3, 2012 (UTC)
  - Fair enough. Cade Calrayn 13:44, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

~~Article for the illegal surgery clinic?~~
- Done.
~~Article for the raid on the clinic?~~
- Done.
His beard is awesome. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:04, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
- If you so... :) Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 03:07, June 25, 2012 (UTC)

~~Please find a way to reword the section under the game mechanics so that it is not so choppy sounding.~~
- Done.
~~There is one too many redlinks.~~—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 04:20, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 23:18, July 3, 2012 (UTC)