Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Slammer

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Slammer

• Nominated by: --Clone Commander Lee --Clone Commander Lee 18:02, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A clonepilot form the Battle of Ryloth

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Support

Object

1. Fett's 2 cents & Preliminaries
   • First off, when you nominate an article for GAN, please place the {{GAnom}}. This is my second time I placed the tag on your nominated article. :P
   • Intro needs a major expansion. You can add more about his participation in the Battle of Ryloth.
   • Expand his biography. Make sure you have have subsections within his biography. (i.e "Battle of Ryloth".) Add-in {{Main|Battle of Ryloth/Legends}} after the subsection quote, if you plan to use my suggestion.
     • The objection about subsectioning is invalid, as there isn't enough content to fill each section. CC7567 ^(talk) 22:38, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
   • Missing quotes. You need one above the intro (The Header), and one after each section and subsections. You can use {{Dialogue|}} or {{quote|}}, which ever you prefer.
   • Completely missing sources. You need to add in sources as well as the "==Notes & References== and ==Sources==" sections at the bottom of the article.
   • Missing {{Ref|}} tags in the infobox and needs sourcing as well.
   • Refer to Manual of Style, if you need help on maintaining articles.
   • JangFett ^Talk 18:12, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments

• Lee, seriously, have you touched the page at all? I'm looking at the edit history, and I don't see your name there anywhere. I would suggest working on this more and familiarizing yourself with the expectations for a GA (notably at the top of this page) before nominating this. I'm willing to give you a chance, but I would highly recommend reading a few of the current Good Articles and familiarizing yourself with the expectations. CC7567 ^(talk) 20:27, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
• Yes. You must realise that the reviewers and the GAN page aren't there to tell you exactly what to do. Most of the work should be done before nomination. We're simply here to pick up on anything you may have overlooked. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 02:14, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (AC only)

1. Per nominator request. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:05, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
2. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 19:54, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
3. Grunny ^(Talk) 23:41, 13 June 2009 (UTC)