Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Skirmish in Docking Bay 84

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Skirmish in Docking Bay 84

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 00:07, September 25, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:36, October 9, 2012 (UTC)
2. Good job with Project Hero. When my current projects finished I might start a bounty hunter one up. Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 04:54, November 1, 2012 (UTC)
3. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 21:32, November 15, 2012 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:54, November 16, 2012 (UTC)
5. Good work, but please pay better attention to your formatting in the future.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:21, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Code-8's report

• In an attempt to rescue the scientist, the former apprentice of Jedi Master Orgus Din, T7-O1, and Padawan Kira Carsen The way this sentence is written it seems as though T7 is Orgus Din's apprentice, I think you should take away Din's reference and find another way to write the Hero of Tython in this spot.
  • Reworked it.
    • Not how I expected it to happen, but was better anyway. :) Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 04:54, November 1, 2012 (UTC)
• When saying T7-O1 in some spots it uses the number pelling and sometimes it says Teeseven. Make sure only one of these gets used
  • Both are viable names for the droid - his full name, and the colloquial. It's like a full name and a last name.
    • Didn't notice the number was only used the first time. Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 04:54, November 1, 2012 (UTC)
• Lastly should Doc Tarnis be mentioned as a commander in the infobox since he manipulated the event to happen. Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 10:34, October 26, 2012 (UTC)
  • He's not actually present, so no. Cade Calrayn 21:02, October 31, 2012 (UTC)
    • Wasn't sure about that one anyway. Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 04:54, November 1, 2012 (UTC)

Toprawa

• I believe it would be appropriate to specify "Cold War" in the infobox's "conflict" field.
  • Added in parantheses, as the Desolator crisis is a conflict in the Cold War.
    • The mission to Coruscant and the Desolator crisis are ultimately subplots of the larger Cold War, so it would be best to present it all in descending order, much like Battle of Kal'Shebbol and Battle of Ession do. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:33, November 16, 2012 (UTC)
• I did a lot of update linking and other miscellaneous cleanup to your reference note about the TOR dating logic, which I notice seems to have the same issues in every article you nominate. I suggest copy and pasting this cleaned-up version of the reference note into all of your articles, those you have already written and those you are going to write. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:49, November 16, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the help. Cade Calrayn 20:24, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:21, November 16, 2012 (UTC)