- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Skirmish between the Borokii and the Januul
- Nominated by: Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:39, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:Finally got around to nomming this. Obviously, for project novels :P
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
Assuming you'll kill that intro redlink like you said you would. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 21:27, April 9, 2013 (UTC)- Sir Cavalier of One
(Squadron channel) 10:26, April 12, 2013 (UTC) - DarthRevan1173
(Long live Lord Revan) 21:42, April 14, 2013 (UTC) - Winterz (talk) 02:04, April 29, 2013 (UTC)
- Cade Calrayn 02:07, May 5, 2013 (UTC)
Object
Floyd
Should "Warriors" be capitalized in the infobox? Doesn't seem like it is anywhere else. Does it appear this way in the book?- De capitalized
Not seeing a location in the infobox.- Added
Intro: Context on the Situng Borokii and the Hovsgol Januul.- Added
Again in the body: furthermore, context on the Qulun.- Contexified (that may or may not be a word :P )
Link for the Januul camp?- Linked, will create an article for it tomorrow
"The Jedi fought both sides, and after around ten minutes of fighting, both sides ceased their assaults and agreed to hear the Jedi out after realizing that their finest weapons had been destroyed by the Jedi, and that the Jedi had avoided harming anyone." This is a long, choppy, and flow-killing sentence. Try to smooth it out, you might have to split it in two.- How does that look?
" fighting broke out. The Jedi fought both sides, and after around ten minutes of fighting," Fighting-fought-fighting. Try to avoid this type of repetition.- Fixed
Could we get a link for the Borokii council?- Linked
Prelude section is not fully sourced.- Oops
"To achieve this, the Jedi hoped to negotiate an arrangement between the Alwari nomads and the Unity." What would the nature of this arrangement be?- Added
Context on a Sadain.- Contexified
"Shortly after, the Jedi returned to Cuipernam," Cuipernam? Place hasn't been mentioned before in the article.- Added a bit to the prelude. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:15, April 3, 2013 (UTC)
- IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 00:54, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
Winterz
DEFAULTSORT this baby, sup.- Like this?
I don't think "Overclans" should be capitalized.Winterz (talk) 11:44, April 16, 2013 (UTC)- Decapitalized. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:46, April 17, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:45, May 5, 2013 (UTC)