- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Contents
Sinvatt Bovic
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:37, 20 March 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Hot off the presses
- WookieeProject (optional):
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
(Votes required: No additional votes required to pass, please consider reviewing another article.)
Support
- Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 08:28, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
- LucaRoR
(Talk) 08:38, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 05:27, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 17:16, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
I propose a new category: Category:Debtors OOM 224 10:01, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
Object
Braha
"Wesell and Fett carried him out of the compound and into the Clawdite's speeder, the former promising to split the bounty as promised." variations of the word promise are used in close proximity here, I think you should change the first instance.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 12:24, 29 March 2022 (UTC)- Fixed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:37, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
Luca
The P&T sentence isn't really a personality trait, IMO: it's more like something he did.LucaRoR
(Talk) 10:30, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
- I'm trying to establish how much he cared about his collection, hence the stuff he did for it and how it was valued to him. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:13, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
"Struggling to get in the cockpit, Wesell sniped the controls and stunned her bounty, checking him to make sure he was not a changeling. Wesell and Fett carried him out of the compound and into the Clawdite's speeder, the former promising to split the bounty as they had previously agreed." Wesell was struggling to get into the cockpit?UberSoldat93(talk) 05:04, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
- Fixed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:23, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 10:01, 12 May 2022 (UTC)