Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Simpi

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Simpi

  • Nominated by: MasterCommerce GuildFredcerique 02:47, March 9, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Simpi will rule us all!

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:41, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:16, April 6, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 18:35, April 9, 2020 (UTC)
  4. WPGE! —spookywillowwtalk 18:40, April 9, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:08, April 9, 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • If you're using a date reference to source the words "Decades later," then you can definitely change them to "around 34 ABY" or something similar.
    • Fair enough. Changed to 34 ABY.
  • Similarly, the content in the first paragraph of that section can be cut down and moved to the second paragraph, which currently consists of only two sentences.
    • I'm not sure what exactly should be removed from that paragraph. I feel like all of it is necessary context for the reader to understand the events taking place. Could you elaborate? Also, the two paragraphs have no relation in subject matter. I don't feel it would be appropriate to combine them simply due to length.
      • It just looks odd, having a tiny paragraph right after a big one. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:32, March 25, 2020 (UTC)
  • If the subject has no Legends counterpart, then mentioning "canon" in the BTS is unnecessary. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:42, March 23, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:08, April 9, 2020 (UTC)