- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Sil Vaturha
- Nominated by: praguepride (Talk) 22:52, June 11, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Was a CANom that got too big: Original CANom page
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Good to see a new
facesignature around here. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 08:59, June 19, 2014 (UTC) - QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 21:52, July 15, 2014 (UTC) 
Assuming Tope's objections were correctly complied with. Winterz (talk) 19:03, August 7, 2014 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:18, August 13, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:58, August 14, 2014 (UTC)
Object
Code-8
In the bio either a usage of "her" or "she" should be replaced with her name- Done --praguepride (Talk) 13:47, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
In the S&A and equipment sections you should replace the first usage of "she" with her name- Done --praguepride (Talk) 13:47, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
- I'm seeing nothing in the Skills and Abilities yet Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 07:53, June 13, 2014 (UTC)
- Oops, that's because there wasn't anything before. Done --praguepride (Talk) 10:08, June 13, 2014 (UTC)
- I'm seeing nothing in the Skills and Abilities yet Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 07:53, June 13, 2014 (UTC)
- Done --praguepride (Talk) 13:47, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
She was kept in line with a Vec-Tech AA-2 Keeper. Please say here who kept her in line with this.- Done --praguepride (Talk) 13:47, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
Add that Corellia was a planet in both the bio and intro- Done --praguepride (Talk) 13:47, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
You need to link to 0 BBY somewhere in the body as it is linked to in the intro.- Done --praguepride (Talk) 13:47, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
- More later, nice job. Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 12:01, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
Mention that Stend VI was a planet in the intro, you've also double-linked to planet in the bio.Commander Code-8 Felicitations malefactors! 06:59, June 15, 2014 (UTC)- Done --praguepride (Talk) 14:35, June 15, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
The 0 BBY date most likely needs a separate reference to source that information. I doubt Wretched literally says before 0 BBY.- Removed the date and instead made reference to Galactic Civil War. Book is set during Rebellion era so makes sense. --praguepride (Talk) 15:12, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
- Added "after the Battle of Yavin" to add more specificity to the time period. --praguepride (Talk) 17:46, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
- Removed the date and instead made reference to Galactic Civil War. Book is set during Rebellion era so makes sense. --praguepride (Talk) 15:12, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
I think the article should make mention of her headdress or head set or whatever you call that thing. The Equipment section would suffice, unless there's something that ties the item to her characterization, in which case it could go into the P/T.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:38, July 10, 2014 (UTC)- I don't know what you're referring to. There isn't a headress or head set listed. Are you thinking of the slave collar but that's mentioned as the Keeper... --praguepride (Talk) 15:12, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
- I'm just noting here that I've spoken to prague on IRC regarding both objections. He's agreed to address the first one in the coming days but just sort of trailed off and deflected conversation on the second one, so I'm not sure what his plans are. I would consider both of these unaddressed as of now, for the record. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:43, August 5, 2014 (UTC)
- Added comment about illustration to Behind the scenes. Let me know if that is good enough. --praguepride (Talk) 17:46, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
- I specifically told you on IRC that that was not what I was looking for. That information has no business whatsoever being in the BTS. It should be moved into the Equipment section and rewritten from an IU perspective. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:29, August 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Done praguepride (Talk) 16:52, August 10, 2014 (UTC)
- Perfect. Thank you. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:18, August 13, 2014 (UTC)
- Done praguepride (Talk) 16:52, August 10, 2014 (UTC)
- I specifically told you on IRC that that was not what I was looking for. That information has no business whatsoever being in the BTS. It should be moved into the Equipment section and rewritten from an IU perspective. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:29, August 9, 2014 (UTC)
- Added comment about illustration to Behind the scenes. Let me know if that is good enough. --praguepride (Talk) 17:46, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
- I'm just noting here that I've spoken to prague on IRC regarding both objections. He's agreed to address the first one in the coming days but just sort of trailed off and deflected conversation on the second one, so I'm not sure what his plans are. I would consider both of these unaddressed as of now, for the record. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:43, August 5, 2014 (UTC)
- I don't know what you're referring to. There isn't a headress or head set listed. Are you thinking of the slave collar but that's mentioned as the Keeper... --praguepride (Talk) 15:12, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
The image needs to be reuploaded to remove that weird blue line on the right edge.Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:30, August 9, 2014 (UTC)- Done praguepride (Talk) 16:56, August 10, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:00, August 14, 2014 (UTC)