Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sigma-class long-range shuttle

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Sigma-class long-range shuttle

• Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:58, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First ship-class nom for me.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Cylka^-talk- 02:59, 1 April 2009 (UTC)
2. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 06:59, 2 April 2009 (UTC)
3. Graestan^(Talk) 21:59, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
4. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:41, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
5. Grunny ^(Talk) 06:01, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. The only thing I would consider adding is something to the history section about the Empire-in-exile, since it is noted in the infobox, and you mention Marasiah Fel's mission. Other than that, interesting read, Tranner. Cylka^-talk- 20:22, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
   • Done. Thanks for the review. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:26, 31 March 2009 (UTC)
2. Graestan the Merciless:
   • Second sentence of the intro is a bit of a run-on.
     • Done. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 12:22, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
   • Last sentence of the intro makes little sense at present; please provide more specific wording.
     • Done. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 12:22, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
   • Context for the whole Skywalker affair should be added; it reads like mumbo jumbo.
     • Done. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 12:22, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
   • Graestan^(Talk) 20:27, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 06:01, 9 April 2009 (UTC)