Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Shafu

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Contents

  • 1 Shafu
    • 1.1 (3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Ayrehead
        • 1.1.2.2 Emperor's Advices
        • 1.1.2.3 Toprawa
        • 1.1.2.4 Winterz
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Shafu

  • Nominated by: Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 16:51, June 15, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Project Hero

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:48, June 16, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:10, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
  3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:25, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 19:10, July 12, 2014 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Winterz (talk) 23:40, July 19, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Ayrehead
  • "Giving T7-O1 to Zallow, Shafu went on to work as an undercover operative for Zallow, infilitrating the criminal underworld during the Great Galactic War." Could you change one of the Zallows? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:38, June 15, 2014 (UTC)
    • Done. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 00:12, June 16, 2014 (UTC)
  • "rumors of an Imperial spy in the upper echelons of the Great Galactic War" in the upper echelons of the war itself? Shouldn't this be in the upper echelons of one of the factions in the war or something? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:38, June 15, 2014 (UTC)
    • I... what. Don't know where that came from. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 00:12, June 16, 2014 (UTC)
Emperor's Advices
  • there are few dupp. links on the bio part. I think it should be fixed. Emperor Jarjarkine GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Senate Hall 03:56, June 24, 2014 (UTC)
    • That's a sofixit, but there aren't any.
      • Objection(s) overridden by AgriCorps 18:48, July 12, 2014 (UTC) As per IRC consensus. 1358 (Talk) 18:48, July 12, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • It's unclear to whom "him" is referring here: "T7-O1 believed that Shafu underestimated him and his capabilities." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:04, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
    • T7; changed. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 19:06, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
Winterz
  • Shouldn't there be Jedi Order instead in the affiliations' section of the infobox? "Jedi" is a member of the Jedi Order(s), not an organization, though I take it you intended to write Ven Zallow instead?
  • May I ask why the "nowiki" tags in the quotes? I removed them in preview mode and it didn't seem to change anything. I'm sort of confused on their use there. Winterz (talk) 22:24, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:40, July 19, 2014 (UTC)