Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sha Dun

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Sha Dun

• Nominated by: Grunny ^(Talk) 05:37, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Ambitious Legacy

(3 ACs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 08:10, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
2. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 14:26, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
3. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:35, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
4. Looks good.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 15:46, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
5. True Kilson Likes PIE 16:31, 12 April 09 (UTC)
6. Excellent. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:50, 18 April 2009 (UTC)
7. Another good one, Grunny! Cylka^-talk- 09:23, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
   • Context on Azard needed in intro.
     • Added.
   • Parts of the first paragraph of the bio read too much like the intro. Please reword.
     • Reworded the intro, how's it looking now? :)
   • Very nice work, Grunny. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 12:50, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
     • Thanks, Tranner :D. Grunny ^(Talk) 13:13, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
2. This is a really small objection, but you forgot to reference the last sentence in the Behind the Scenes section. Other than that, seems cool. Kilson Likes PIE 02:42, 12 April 09 (UTC)
   • Its self-sourcing: "who appears in the Trust Issues story arc", therefore a reference would be superfluous. Grunny ^(Talk) 14:25, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:23, 19 April 2009 (UTC)