Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Serias

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Serias

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 07:27, August 9, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A planet we didn't want to explore.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:14, August 12, 2015 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 22:15, August 12, 2015 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Exiled Jedi (talk) 22:35, August 16, 2015 (UTC)
  4. 501st dogma(talk) 17:17, August 17, 2015 (UTC)
  5. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 03:59, August 18, 2015 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa
  • Does the source actually include this little [..] thing at the end of the quote, or is this your addition? "The only planet in the system, Serias, maintains conditions capable of supporting standard life forms [..]"
    • My addition, but for some reason with just two dots. Corrected to three dots.
  • You should break up the "History" section into two sentences. I would suggest starting off with something like "The team explored the planet following the Battle of Endor. However, they only collected limited information, etc. etc." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:12, August 12, 2015 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Could you mention Starchaser's fears about Imperials finding it in the History? Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:56, August 12, 2015 (UTC)
    • I believe that is not relevant to the planet itself, because he actually expresses his fears about the Empire exploiting the asteroid belt, not the planet. Imperators II(Talk) 22:08, August 12, 2015 (UTC)

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