Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/School tram

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.

School tram

  • Nominated by: @Mustafar29「talk」(he/him/his/hisself) 22:43, 17 January 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I've been fascinated by how Skeleton Crew creators brought into Star Wars life our earthy concepts. One of them is the school tram. Some people may say it's an intrinsically American thing. Not really! It combines the features of European trams/streetcars/trolleys with American school buses. I believe the article checks all the boxes, and even goes an extra mile in some cases. I've uploaded audio files for every quote I've used. // I would have probably nominated the article earlier, but the show was still on. I wouldn't be nominating it now if it were under Anti-Spoiler Protection. Luckily, the protection for every episode a tram we know for sure was a school one has expired. // This is my first GA nomination, but I've finally ventured out of my comfort zone and hope to hear a bit of you guys' critique (and criticism alike) to make this potential Good Article even "gooder" ;)
  • Date Archived: 12:44, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1115 words (109 introduction, 792 body, 214 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 860 words (110 introduction, 610 body, 140 behind the scenes)
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Dani
  • FIRST OFF! Welcome to the the review process. Let's jump right it. We shouldn't say its the pilot episode without anything saying it's the pilot. Pilots don't always air. Just saying the premiere or first episode would work. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 01:45, 18 January 2025 (UTC)
    • Corrected, it was my oversight. I incorrectly assumed that the terms pilot and premiere were synonymous. @Mustafar29「talk」(he/him/his/hisself) 16:15, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
  • Make sure to put a Template:1stp somewhere in sources. The BTS should also reflect the 1stp. It shouldn't detail every trailer appearance, just the first (if it's before the Template:1st). We should be noting its date too. You can see an example here Pyre's blaster#Behind the scenes. NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 01:45, 18 January 2025 (UTC)
    • Date noted in the appearances, info on the clip removed. {{1stp}} placed in the Sources right next to the first trailer. @Mustafar29「talk」(he/him/his/hisself) 16:15, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
  • There's some info missing from the Skywalker Sound article. (The request from Watts/Ford and their love of the sound. Also worth noting the reference is extended by the RX-series droid.) NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 01:45, 18 January 2025 (UTC)
  • There's some info missing from Doug Chiang interview. (The tram was used as an example of making the planet dull and safe. They wanted to avoid making it a subway car) NBDani TeamFireballLogo-Collider(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 01:45, 18 January 2025 (UTC)
    • Modified, but please check for yourself if that's enough. @Mustafar29「talk」(he/him/his/hisself) 16:15, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
Lew
  • What is the extent of the appearance in "The Real Good Guys"? Lewisr (talk) 07:41, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
    • None. We don't know if the trams we saw were school trams. Not every tram is a school one. @Mustafar29「talk」(he/him/his/hisself) 23:28, 28 January 2025 (UTC)
      • It appears the tram has the school logo on it, see this edit summary Lewisr (talk) 06:25, 29 January 2025 (UTC)
        • My oversight, sorry. I've extended the article accordingly, also adding a mention on the emblem on hulls. @Mustafar29「talk」(he/him/his/hisself) 22:03, 29 January 2025 (UTC)
  • The episode guide cite for the RX-series droid should be tweaked to specifically link to the trivia gallery and include the slide number, for example see Mika's tent Lewisr (talk) 07:41, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
  • If we're citing Neel's species specifically then it should be to the collider article where the name came from Lewisr (talk) 07:41, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
    • Sure thing, I always cite it elsewhere, not sure why it was missing here. @Mustafar29「talk」(he/him/his/hisself) 23:28, 28 January 2025 (UTC)
  • The BTS has enough room for a relevant image, maybe the series poster with a caption saying the trams first appeared in the show? See Tamara Ryvora's grandfather#Behind the scenes for an example Lewisr (talk) 07:41, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
  • Wim's pronouns and his gender are citable to "This Could Be a Real Adventure" so you can cut the databank reference Lewisr (talk) 07:41, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
    • Thanks for pointing that out, I wasn't sure, so I went for Data. Replaced. @Mustafar29「talk」(he/him/his/hisself) 23:28, 28 January 2025 (UTC)

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