Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sayblohn

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Contents

  • 1 Sayblohn
    • 1.1 (4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Anil
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Sayblohn

  • Nominated by: Imperators II(Talk) 13:21, November 11, 2019 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:46, December 4, 2019 (UTC)
  2. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 18:52, December 10, 2019 (UTC)
  3. ACvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:44, December 13, 2019 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 23:05, December 14, 2019 (UTC)
  5. --Lewisr (talk) 23:17, December 14, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • "[…], the team was ultimately successful in their mission." "The Alliance team subsequently located their contact, […]." In these two instances, I feel like the word "its" would suit better instead of "their," especially after reading this. What do you think?
    • Corrected. I guess I keep overlooking this since it's the opposite in my native language. Imperators II(Talk) 09:36, December 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • Shouldn't the phrase "first edition" be removed when listing Star Wars: The Roleplaying Game per the Layout Guide? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:59, December 12, 2019 (UTC)
    • You're right; amended. Imperators II(Talk) 09:36, December 13, 2019 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:21, December 14, 2019 (UTC)