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Sarsh

  • Nominated by: Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 19:56, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I choose to believe that Sarsh was a Force-sensitive Kilji.
  • Date Archived: 09:47, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 639 words (161 introduction, 457 body, 21 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:CHISS WP:NOVELS

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 19:32, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 01:06, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
  3. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:22, 5 July 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:24, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
  5. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:39, 7 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • "Shortly afterward, the Pathfinder brought a Paccian troop transport in and out of hyperspace to know when Jixtus's fleet would arrive at the system." What does this mean, exactly? As I read it, it seems to say that Sarsh directed this transport to enter and then immediately exit hyperspace as a means of discovering when Jixtus and co. would arrive, but-to me at least-that doesn't really make much sense. Fan26 (Talk) 01:31, 14 May 2023 (UTC)
    • As I understand, how you read it is correct Lewisr (talk) 13:13, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
      • Is there any way to clarify it so it makes more sense? Fan26 (Talk) 12:03, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
        • I don't really know how since it's essentially how the book presents it. Relevant section from the book '"Not at all," Thrawn assured him "He's currently waiting in the outer system aboard a Paccian troop transport. He was going in and out of hyperspace so that we would know when you and Jixtus were coming."' Any suggestions would be appreciated Lewisr (talk) 13:54, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
            • Huh, weird. Fan26 (Talk) 16:05, 30 May 2023 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • The Aelos isn't currently introduced or linked in the intro or body. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:56, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
    • Not sure what happened on that, but I've linked and introduced using prior precedent on Tildnis Lewisr (talk) 20:36, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
      • Is the Nikardun blockade frigate introduced in the second bio paragraph the same as the Aelos or are they separate ships? If they're the same then I think it'd make more sense to just introduce it as the Aelos upfront or it isn't clear. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:26, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
        • Thanks for the spot, fixed Lewisr (talk) 21:56, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • Does the mining compound on Sunrise warrant its own article? It exists as a redlink on the planet's page. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:54, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
    • Created and linked Lewisr (talk) 22:06, 5 July 2023 (UTC)

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