Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Sannab Ro

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Sannab Ro

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 01:50, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 03:10, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 393 words (99 introduction, 270 body, 24 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 401 words (103 introduction, 274 body, 24 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:WOMENWP:PRIDE

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Wok142 (talk) 16:31, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 04:09, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
  3. Xd1358 (Talk) 17:09, 10 July 2024 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 11:38, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 02:32, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

Object

Wok
  • I feel like the word "However" is unnecessary in the second paragraph of the Biography, since the poster is advocating for the creation of the military and that is what ended up happening. Wok142 (talk) 06:08, 16 June 2024 (UTC)
ecks
  • "During the Republic Era, she worked for the Commission for a Safe and Secure Republic, a non-profit think tank headquartered on Level 5121 of the galactic capital planet Coruscant by the time of the Separatist Crisis." Is it really necessary to have two different indicators of time (Republic Era and Separatist Crisis) in the same sentence? I've done some minor rewording in the intro that resolves the issue there, but even in the body it seems a bit superfluous. Xd1358 (Talk) 17:17, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Reworked it into the next sentence; is kinda needed in some form though, as the two aren't entirely synonymous and the Crisis was itself a more defined period of time.—spookywillowwtalk 20:21, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:32, 16 July 2024 (UTC)


  • It's a bit of a tricky case, but scanned up through the book and at the time of the IU publication (c. 34 ABY), it's expected that Ro will emerge as male within fifteen years in the future; it's described as an event that has not yet occurred. Hence documented that as many places as could be, but did alter the infobox from its initial state since it's only expected she will emerge as such, but technically its process is not complete yet, and it's phrased as others expecting that of her, which is ultimately dependant on both(?) her wishes and also nothing happening to Coruscant in the fifteen years post 34 ABY, which we can't confirm the latter.—spookywillowwtalk 01:50, 15 June 2024 (UTC)