Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/SaSassis Bar

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SaSassis Bar

  • Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:15, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Back to Twin Stars of Kira nominations, woot woot
  • Date Archived: 20:25, 22 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 379 words (56 introduction, 210 body, 113 behind the scenes)
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Support

  1. ACvote Nice work TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:20, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 18:31, 11 September 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 21:53, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 20:25, 22 September 2023 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • Does the bartender's employment at SaSassis depend on the players' choices? If not, I believe it'd be best to mention that earlier in the body and not between the {{RPGseed}} tags, like you did on the bartender's page.
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 06:20, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
  • It works for the infobox, but I think mentioning that the adventurers' mission to the bar took place around 6 ABY right after saying the bar existed by around 6 ABY makes the latter dating kinda redundant. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:50, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
    • It still mentions the time period for the mission itself as it could have otherwise implied it took place at another time, but rephrased in order to not have "6 ABY" repeated constantly. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 06:20, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
      • Reads much better! I was also going to ask if mentioning the New Republic's foundation is necessary, but you've already handled that :) TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:20, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • I think you should remove mentions of the bar being constructed by around 6 ABY> This would be like including someone being born before the story were then in for example, which is pretty unnecessary. You can just use the around 6 ABY for the date of the story itself Lewisr (talk) 18:48, 15 September 2023 (UTC)
    • Tweaked. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:38, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 20:25, 22 September 2023 (UTC)