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SP-156
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 21:54, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Inspired by a brief interaction I had with Pablo Hidalgo on Twitter about stormtrooper designations. My headcanon is that the S in SP stands for Sullust.
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Support
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 08:48, 8 September 2021 (UTC)- Fan26 (Talk) 15:01, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
- OOM 224 21:39, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:52, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 09:06, 19 September 2021 (UTC)
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Fan
The body could use a couple images of related subjects, like Sullust or stormtroopers.One of the character encyclopedias ID'd all bucketheads as humans, and per precedent ([1], [2] for example), we assume that is true and that all stormtroopers, including SP-156, are human unless stated otherwise.Fan26 (Talk) 00:44, 4 September 2021 (UTC)- Both done. I don't think there's any applicable options for images aside from Sullust, as almost everything in the article is not pictured besides the planet. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:28, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
- I would argue the body is still a little empty and could use another image, though I agree it would be quite the stretch to, say, throw an image of the Chadra-Fan species in the bio and caption it with something like "SP-156 arrested a member of the Chadra-Fan species (pictured) who was part of the rebellion". I think an image of stormtrooper armor can be placed in the Equipment section however, since that is directly connected to 156 and what that section is discussing. Fan26 (Talk) 02:12, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
- Ok, done. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 09:42, 13 September 2021 (UTC)
- I would argue the body is still a little empty and could use another image, though I agree it would be quite the stretch to, say, throw an image of the Chadra-Fan species in the bio and caption it with something like "SP-156 arrested a member of the Chadra-Fan species (pictured) who was part of the rebellion". I think an image of stormtrooper armor can be placed in the Equipment section however, since that is directly connected to 156 and what that section is discussing. Fan26 (Talk) 02:12, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
- Both done. I don't think there's any applicable options for images aside from Sullust, as almost everything in the article is not pictured besides the planet. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:28, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
All info should be presented in chronological order, so 156 working with Nyende should be mentioned first before their work on Sullust."The eight stormtroopers scanned the more than half a dozen rooms of the Keepsake for comm signals and power sources for entering out of caution for bombs." A little confusing to follow with all the "for"s."Thara Nyende trusted the stormtrooper as she trusted any trooper." This is more of a character trait of Thara Nyende than it is 156, and is thus better served on that article instead of here.UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:45, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
- All addressed. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 20:28, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
"Human male" is repeated in the Biography and Personality and traits.UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- Switched up the first instance. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:03, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- I mean it's redundant to mention it in the body twice. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:13, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- Very well, removed the second instance. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 08:24, 8 September 2021 (UTC)
- I mean it's redundant to mention it in the body twice. UberSoldat93
- Switched up the first instance. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:03, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 09:06, 19 September 2021 (UTC)