- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Rys
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:35, August 19, 2016 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A break from Leia noms while I sort the last few out.
(1 ACs/0 Users/1 Total)
Support
Imperators II(Talk) 04:53, August 20, 2016 (UTC)
Object
Imperators II
Does Ambush really state that Rugosa is a moon of Toydaria? The Databank entry for Rugosa doesn't seem to support this.- Huh I was absolutely dead certain it was Toydaria's moon, but you're right nothing ever actually states this. Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:43, August 19, 2016 (UTC)
You should either refer to the organization as the CIS or the Separatists, or explain that the two are the same thing.Imperators II(Talk) 14:43, August 19, 2016 (UTC)- I've added that the Confederacy used the Separatist Droid Army, is this enough to clarify who is being referred to or show I add more? Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:43, August 19, 2016 (UTC)
- Seems fine to me now. Imperators II(Talk) 04:53, August 20, 2016 (UTC)
- I've added that the Confederacy used the Separatist Droid Army, is this enough to clarify who is being referred to or show I add more? Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:43, August 19, 2016 (UTC)
Comments
- This article is 1,228 words long, by my count, and therefore needs to go to FAN. I'll give you a brief chance to see this note before we close the nomination. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:19, August 30, 2016 (UTC)
- The AC has agreed to remove this nom, per the above comment. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:17, August 30, 2016 (UTC)