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Rora Seake
- Nominated by: Cade
Calrayn 17:43, October 11, 2014 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Project Hero
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:39, October 21, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:59, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 02:40, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
1358 (Talk) 09:47, October 24, 2014 (UTC)- 501st dogma(talk) 22:45, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Object
Exiled Jedi
I thought that Sith Pureblood was supposed to be capitalized.- Apparently not, according to the Codex.
You cite a lot of the first part of the biography to the time citation. Shouldn't another reference be used here?- Yeah, added.
Could you make it clear how the Knight found out about her mission in the biography?- Well, you don't have to tell her when she asks, so I left it vague.
- I just thought it would be important to note that she was betrayed. You could mention it separately from when she asks the Jedi about it.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 16:45, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
- I just thought it would be important to note that she was betrayed. You could mention it separately from when she asks the Jedi about it.--Exiled Jedi
- Well, you don't have to tell her when she asks, so I left it vague.
Do you think it would be appropriate to link to this somewhere?- Not really, since she's not really friends with her pets...
"such a trance caused her to float above the ground and generated a sphere of lightning around her" Could the lightning simply be a protection measure and not necessarily a part of the trance?- Changed.
Could you change one of the uses of "trained" in the last sentence of the Powers and abilities section?--Exiled Jedi(Greetings) 14:25, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:47, October 26, 2014 (UTC)