Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Rora Seake

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Contents

  • 1 Rora Seake
    • 1.1 (4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Exiled Jedi
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Rora Seake

  • Nominated by: Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 17:43, October 11, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Project Hero

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 22:39, October 21, 2014 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:59, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 02:40, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 09:47, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
  5. 501st dogma(talk) 22:45, October 26, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi
  • I thought that Sith Pureblood was supposed to be capitalized.
    • Apparently not, according to the Codex.
  • You cite a lot of the first part of the biography to the time citation. Shouldn't another reference be used here?
    • Yeah, added.
  • Could you make it clear how the Knight found out about her mission in the biography?
    • Well, you don't have to tell her when she asks, so I left it vague.
      • I just thought it would be important to note that she was betrayed. You could mention it separately from when she asks the Jedi about it.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 16:45, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
  • Do you think it would be appropriate to link to this somewhere?
    • Not really, since she's not really friends with her pets...
  • "such a trance caused her to float above the ground and generated a sphere of lightning around her" Could the lightning simply be a protection measure and not necessarily a part of the trance?
    • Changed.
  • Could you change one of the uses of "trained" in the last sentence of the Powers and abilities section?--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 14:25, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
    • Changed. Cade GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Calrayn 03:58, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 22:47, October 26, 2014 (UTC)