Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ritual of Nathema

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Ritual of Nathema

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 16:24, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Project Hero

(3 ACs/5 Users/8 Total)

Support

1. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:21, March 31, 2013 (UTC)
2. This article needs a tag warning that it may frighten younger readers. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 22:13, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:02, April 7, 2013 (UTC)
4. —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 04:28, April 7, 2013 (UTC)
5. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:24, April 12, 2013 (UTC)
6. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:33, April 15, 2013 (UTC)
7. DarthRevan1173 (Long live Lord Revan) 03:42, April 15, 2013 (UTC)
8. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:42, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Floyd has one thing

• "While historians saw it as one of the greatest achievements in the history of the Old Sith Empire," I think this should be clarified as Imperial historians. I doubt many other historians would celebrate it so readily. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:43, March 30, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 01:47, March 30, 2013 (UTC)

CC-8

• Probably best to move the last two sentances in the intro quote since they're used in the aftermath quote. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 11:09, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. Cade Calrayn 16:16, April 1, 2013 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

• Something very minor: could you double-check your capitalization of "ritual" throughout the article? It's mostly lowercase but is capitalized a few times, without it being exactly clear why. (This would also apply to the actual section, "The ritual.") Please clarify. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:38, April 16, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. The uncapitalized ones that are left are referring to the Sith magic. Cade Calrayn 05:40, April 16, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 05:42, April 16, 2013 (UTC)