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Riot Control Walker

  • Nominated by: OOM 224 (he/him) 09:03, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Checked all the reference books and whatnot. Hope I didn't brick anything this time.
  • Date Archived: 17:25, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 636 words (59 introduction, 364 body, 213 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB, WP:LEGO

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote Nice work! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:59, 10 October 2023 (UTC)
  2. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 02:24, 11 October 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 16:12, 11 October 2023 (UTC)
  4. Those quotes are incredible Panther436 (talk) 19:59, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
  5. Booply (talk) 13:28, 2 November 2023 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • If the name "Jedha walker" is an alternate name for the walker, I think it should be mentioned in bold in the intro. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:12, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
  • (Reviewing note) I have removed the date parameters in Appearances per this. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:20, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Alrighty. Thanks, Anil! OOM 224 (he/him) 15:20, 4 October 2023 (UTC) — hmm, I will note though that I originally put the combined citation for the date and Jedha being a moon there to cut down on the number of citations. OOM 224 (he/him) 15:24, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
      • Yeah, I agree with that. I have only replaced that with the regular Timelines citation because it was already used for the Battle of Scarif later in the article, so there are still nine unique citations in total. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:33, 4 October 2023 (UTC)
        • Ah, I see now, thanks!
  • The walker is a modified AT-ST per its description in LEGO Star Wars Battles: "A modified AT-ST aka chicken walker aka… wait, does this galaxy even have chickens?"
  • The app also has some statistics about the walker, such as where it's unlocked and how it fares against certain enemies, that can be covered in BTS per precedent. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:33, 10 October 2023 (UTC)
    • My bad for ignoring my prior edits noting it down as a modified AT-ST. Added relevant info! OOM 224 (he/him) 19:54, 10 October 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • Jedha and Scarif could use some context in the intro Lewisr (talk) 06:16, 8 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Re-arranged sentence to make it clearer. OOM 224 (he/him) 14:18, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 17:24, 2 November 2023 (UTC)