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Rill

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:28, July 6, 2016 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Nearing the end of the Leia character GAs.

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Imperators II(Talk) 10:48, July 27, 2016 (UTC)
  2. Cevan IMPpress (talk) 15:18, July 27, 2016 (UTC)
  3. ACvote IFYLOFD (Talk) 15:43, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 14:03, September 4, 2016 (UTC)
  5. Cwedin(talk) 07:19, September 12, 2016 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Well done. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 23:02, September 16, 2016 (UTC)

Object

Imperators II
  • Is "the" instead of "there" in the lead quote your mistake or the comic's?
  • Just wanted to confirm: is the plural of Espirion (and Alder-Espirion) "Espirion" or "Espirions"? Imperators II(Talk) 05:47, July 27, 2016 (UTC)
    • Huh, having check through all the relevant comics it turns out that the Espirion are never actually named, but that Jordan D. White confirmed their identification on his blog. He refers to them there as Espirions so I've fixed the pluralisation here and on all other relevant articles. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:43, July 27, 2016 (UTC)
Floyd
  • Is there any further context on the title of "consul"? Any responsibilities or a governmental body that he served as consul for?
    • Nope, no context is really given at all other than the fact that he sets up the meeting. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:00, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
  • Could we get a note in the intro of why Leia wanted the Alder-Espirions to join their group?
  • Could there be a link for the "entanglements" on Skaradosh? IFYLOFD (Talk) 23:50, August 31, 2016 (UTC)
    • I don't feel that the handover on Skaradosh really requires an article separate from the mission to rescue the Alderaanians article, as it is very brief and basically consists of Dreed and a couple of stormtroopers being gunned down without really ever having a chance to defend themselves. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:00, September 1, 2016 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • The Bio could be subsectioned as customary. Are there more images and/or quotes to use? Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 00:06, September 8, 2016 (UTC)
    • I didn't think it was quite long enough to merit those, but done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:03, September 9, 2016 (UTC)
  • This isn't an objection, but as this is becoming a regular thing on your noms, I'm making note of it here. It's redundant and unnecessary, particularly in articles this brief, to repeat species and sex between the Bio and the P/T. Just choose one section to present that information.
    • Yeah that's a habit I've been trying to get out of, feel free to point it out if I do it again in future to help reinforce it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:41, September 16, 2016 (UTC)
  • At the end of the second paragraph of the first subsection, can article note where exactly the meeting was taking place? At a governmental building or some palace, perhaps?
    • Done, although it's fairly vague since there isn't that much background setting detail in the scene. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:41, September 16, 2016 (UTC)
  • This sentence tells me nothing about any insights into his character. If there's nothing else to add to the P/T, I would suggest just cutting this: "He guessed that Organa's absence from the meeting might have offended Beonel but could not guess if that was why Beonel was unwilling to continue talks."
  • As with Beon Beonel, I would like to see an Equipment section detailing his robes. Taking that a step further, I think you should add a brief line (in Beonel too) that these robes are (evidently) customary of their people. This will need to be worded delicately to avoid original research. I would suggest something like "Like other Espirion natives, Rill wore [robes, etc.]." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 05:24, September 15, 2016 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 23:02, September 16, 2016 (UTC)