- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Right of Denial
- Nominated by: Jinzler 14:55, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A right
(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
Kilson 00:54, April 5, 2011 (UTC)- Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 00:48, April 16, 2011 (UTC) 
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:47, April 19, 2011 (UTC)- QuiGonJinn (Talk) 10:59, April 20, 2011 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:03, April 20, 2011 (UTC)
Object
Return of the PIE
In the Bts, "The right later was later mentioned in the 2008 novel Revelation." I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.- Fixed --Jinzler 10:20, April 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Other than that one, nice job Jinzler. Kilson 03:03, April 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you! --Jinzler 10:20, April 4, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa
Might it be worth it to try and perhaps utilize the Law infobox for this article? That's the closest thing I can see that might apply here.Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:54, April 12, 2011 (UTC)- I've added one to the article. It's not perfect and I haven't been able to fill most of the fields, but it will hopefully suffice. Thanks for the suggestion. --Jinzler 21:09, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
- Cool. Works for me.
- I've added one to the article. It's not perfect and I haven't been able to fill most of the fields, but it will hopefully suffice. Thanks for the suggestion. --Jinzler 21:09, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
Might we also insert the ellipsis code (…) into the intro quote and History quote?- I copy-and-pasted the quotes from the source, in which the ellipsis' were three full stops interspaced by spaces. However, I have now implemented the coding, as I see no reason to retain the source's punctuation formatting. --Jinzler 22:17, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
- Good deal. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:39, April 13, 2011 (UTC)
- I copy-and-pasted the quotes from the source, in which the ellipsis' were three full stops interspaced by spaces. However, I have now implemented the coding, as I see no reason to retain the source's punctuation formatting. --Jinzler 22:17, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
Same for the em-dash in the Bio quote?- Done --Jinzler 22:17, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
Does the source capitalize mentions of "Academy" when used generally? i.e, "he returned to the Academy"?- This is something that is inconsistent in Living Force sources, but Marching Orders does capitalize "Academy", so I think it is appropriate to do so here. --Jinzler 22:17, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
- As long as a source does use it that way, I'm fine with it. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:39, April 13, 2011 (UTC)
- This is something that is inconsistent in Living Force sources, but Marching Orders does capitalize "Academy", so I think it is appropriate to do so here. --Jinzler 22:17, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
Even though the Revelation appearance is Mo, is there no other info that can possibly be gleaned from there?Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:38, April 12, 2011 (UTC)- Sadly not. The mention in Revelation consists entirely of the quote it is in the "Description" section, which only tells us that Bardan Jusik didn't invoke the Right of Denial when he left the Jedi Order. I don't think this is worth mentioning, but I'm happy to add something if need be. Thankyou for your review. --Jinzler 22:17, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
- I think there might be something to be said for the info in that quote, actually. I've never read the book myself, but it seems to me that that's evidence that the right continued to exist as late as 41 ABY or whatever the time frame is for that reference, unless I'm interpreting that incorrectly. At any rate, you could probably at least mention that this guy specifically chose not to invoke the right under whatever the circumstances were. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:39, April 13, 2011 (UTC)
- I don't think we can assume that the right was still in existance in 41 ABY, because the only evidence for that is that Jusik seems to assume that Jaina knows what he is talking about. I have now added a few sentences on his departure from the Order, so please let me know what you think of them. And I am sorry that I have taken so long to address this objection, I've unfortunately been rather busy recently. Cheers. --Jinzler 20:24, April 20, 2011 (UTC)
- No worries. Change is perfect. Nice job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:03, April 20, 2011 (UTC)
- I don't think we can assume that the right was still in existance in 41 ABY, because the only evidence for that is that Jusik seems to assume that Jaina knows what he is talking about. I have now added a few sentences on his departure from the Order, so please let me know what you think of them. And I am sorry that I have taken so long to address this objection, I've unfortunately been rather busy recently. Cheers. --Jinzler 20:24, April 20, 2011 (UTC)
- I think there might be something to be said for the info in that quote, actually. I've never read the book myself, but it seems to me that that's evidence that the right continued to exist as late as 41 ABY or whatever the time frame is for that reference, unless I'm interpreting that incorrectly. At any rate, you could probably at least mention that this guy specifically chose not to invoke the right under whatever the circumstances were. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:39, April 13, 2011 (UTC)
- Sadly not. The mention in Revelation consists entirely of the quote it is in the "Description" section, which only tells us that Bardan Jusik didn't invoke the Right of Denial when he left the Jedi Order. I don't think this is worth mentioning, but I'm happy to add something if need be. Thankyou for your review. --Jinzler 22:17, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:03, April 20, 2011 (UTC)
- I'm happy to make an attempt at creating a "tradition infobox" if the AC feel it necessary. However, I would appreciate some suggestions for what fields to include. --Jinzler 14:55, April 2, 2011 (UTC)