Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Retwin

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Retwin

  • Nominated by: Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:20, November 25, 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:Executor ESB character. That cheeky fellow who turns to look at Vader at the end of the film.

(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Could we have a picture of Retwin turning to gaze Vader? (Suggestion, not objection) --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:06, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Grunny (Talk) 10:15, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
  3. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 10:36, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 16:16, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
  5. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 20:42, November 26, 2009 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 03:04, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. One minor objection: In the intro, the "after" and "following" in the same sentence make the chronology confusing: "After serving in Ralltiir's defense forces as an Imperial sympathizer, Retwin joined the Empire following the Imperial subjugation of his homeworld shortly prior to the Battle of Yavin in 0 BBY." Other than that, great work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Jedi Beacon) 14:03, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:57, December 2, 2009 (UTC)