Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Ressa's husband

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Ressa's husband

Nominated by: --Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:56, December 31, 2011 (UTC)
Nomination comments:Small article for the new year. Happy New Year 2012!

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

Small one-mention articles tend to cause more work then the bigger ones. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:13, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
Good job, just be mindful of this in the future. JangFett ^(Talk) 03:41, January 6, 2012 (UTC)
Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 16:48, January 7, 2012 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:01, January 10, 2012 (UTC)
1358 ^(Talk) 15:18, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge

~~A death date, as approximate as it may be, is needed for the infobox.If we know that he was executed on Drezzi needs to be added to.~~
- Well, but you say that his death was sometime before the Great Galactic War, which started in 3681 BBY. So if you write "Sometime before 3681 BBY it's fine. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:05, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
  - It's kind of a debatable thing, IMO. If we were going to do that, we could say that he was born "sometime prior to 3681 BBY." Since we don't have an exact, or even a reasonable approximation, I think we can just leave it blank.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:14, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
    - While I completely understand your problem and I am willing to strike this, an empty field just disturbes the reader. The first time I saw this article I was not aware that he was killed. To avoid this confusion it would be better to have a date, precise or not. I'll think we'll need an expert to solve this problem. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:25, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
      - I asked an admin, and he said that while it's not particularly necessary, it's probably a good idea in this case. So, see how it looks now.
~~A little bit more context for the battle is needed.~~
~~The death date would be needed in the body too.~~
- See above. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:05, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
~~No affiliation e.g. Royal House of Drezzi?~~
Otherwise very good work. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:49, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, but I'm afraid I can't do much with any of those objections. Believe me, I would if I could. I wanted to boost up the article to a couple more words, but all that's there is all that's said about him. I don't think I would even be able to find a reasonable approximation date. And we don't know where he was executed, and it doesn't say anything about his affiliation or if he was even royalty.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:53, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
  - No worries, I understand that problem. However, please take a look if you can deal with my suggestions. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:06, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
~~Plus you give Drezi as his homeworld in the infobox, but state he "resided" on the planet in the bio.~~ Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:06, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
- "After his homeworld was conquered by the resurgent Sith Empire, he was executed." - I mention it a couple sentences later.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:10, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
  - Yes, but is he mentioned apart from the quote? Because it is not stated that he was from Drezzi. It could be that he was from the planet or from every other world in the galaxy. That was my question, sorry for the incorrect phrasing. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 22:15, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
    - Ah, okay then. Changed.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:41, January 1, 2012 (UTC)
      - Drezzi is listed as his homeworld in the infobox. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:22, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
        Fixed.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 23:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
the Great Galactic War, a galaxy-wide conflict fought between the Galactic Republic and the Sith Empire, which occurred in the year 3681 BBY: The war lasted for a longer time. Do you mean which began in the year 3681 BBY? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:22, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
- Heh. Good catch. Fixed.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 23:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
  - That's my job. :P Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 10:13, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Imp

~~"which begun in the year 3681 BBY" Where in the game does it say that? You need to either find an alternative source, or use specific referencing with the {{TORCite}} template as per this CT.~~ --Imperialles 03:38, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
- Found that TEA has it, too. Sourced to that instead.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:14, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
  - Cool beans, but you missed one. --Imperialles 20:01, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
    - Got it.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:25, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Moffship

~~One thing: While having "Years prior to 3,954 BBY" in the death field is fine, it really shouldn't be listed in the birth field as well, per precedent.~~ Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 01:43, January 7, 2012 (UTC)
- Removed. It's probably fine to leave in the body, though, don't you think?—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:08, January 7, 2012 (UTC)
  - Yes, that's fine. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 16:48, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Toprawa

I'm admittedly totally ignorant on this portion of canon, but is there any evidence actually supporting the inclusion of the Old Republic era in the "eras" field? Could this guy not have lived during the Pre-Republic era? Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:26, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 15:18, January 11, 2012 (UTC)