Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Resilient (Venator-class)

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Resilient (Venator-class)

  • Nominated by: QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 18:23, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I just wanted to do a starship.

(4 ACs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote --Eyrezer 04:13, September 18, 2010 (UTC)
  2. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 00:42, September 19, 2010 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 14:54, October 3, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ACvote 1358 (Talk) 17:59, October 4, 2010 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:02, October 4, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Soresu
  • The intro makes it sound like the Republic already knew that the CIS were in control before they were dispatched, but the body seems to imply that they discovered it on arrival. Please clarify.
    • Addressed.
  • By the time the Republic forces arrived at Khorm, however, the planet had fallen into Confederate hands, so the Jedi needed to fight for the agrocite. Upon arrival at Khorm, You're kind of going over the same point in time twice. Could they be merged somehow? SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 23:24, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Unless Complete Cross-Sections literally says every Republic Venator Star Destroyer ever was manufactured by KDY, I would suggest removing that tidbit from the infobox. If it does support this information, you should specify KDY's involvement in the body of the article.
    • The book does say that all Venators were manufactured by KDY, and I added that part seeing as other Venator GAs and FAs state it. I've added a sentence regarding KDY's involvement to the history section.
  • I'm guessing the source does not literally say it was "painted" red. It's an obvious inference, sure, but we should avoid making these extrapolations on our own. I would suggest just saying its hull was "red in color," or something similar: "and its hull was painted in red color."
    • Fine, changed it.
  • The Description section should include mention of the ship's complement, namely the V-19s and LAAT/i gunships, rather than the Commanders and crew section. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:19, September 21, 2010 (UTC)
Xd1358
  • No more applicable categories? Not sure, but I think there's something like "Republic (star)ships"… 1358 (Talk) 20:05, September 26, 2010 (UTC)
    • Had to do some searching to find it. Added. QuiGonJinn Senate seal(Talk) 20:38, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:03, October 4, 2010 (UTC)