- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Rentor
- Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi
(Syndicure) 23:29, 3 April 2023 (UTC) - Nomination comments: thrawn and eli both being from backwater worlds is such a nice touch by Zahn
- Date Archived: 17:41, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 598 words (62 introduction, 398 body, 138 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:CHISS WP:Novels WP:AST
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Support
Imperators II(Talk) 14:39, 9 April 2023 (UTC)- Samonic
(Talk) 17:46, 9 April 2023 (UTC) - LucaRoR (Talk) 16:12, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 14:24, 12 April 2023 (UTC)
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Imp
Reading the body first and then the intro, the fact that Vurika was Vurawn's sister took me by surprise :P - it's intro-exclusive.The end of the lead quote is missing punctuation.What's the erroneous mention in Year by Year? Generally, errors are noted in the BTS.- I think it would be beneficial to note there which world was imperiled in Treason if that is in fact true at all and if we know which one was it. I wouldn't mind also seeing full dates for that book and Lesser Evil plus the authors of Year by Year. Imperators II(Talk) 08:29, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
- done - theres no specific world in Treason thats imperiled BloodOfIrizi(Syndicure) 21:04, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
- done - theres no specific world in Treason thats imperiled BloodOfIrizi
- I think it would be beneficial to note there which world was imperiled in Treason if that is in fact true at all and if we know which one was it. I wouldn't mind also seeing full dates for that book and Lesser Evil plus the authors of Year by Year. Imperators II(Talk) 08:29, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
Given that the Chiss are an interstellar civilization, it doesn't seem to me that the statement that Thrawn was "a student at a Rentor academy" is quite enough to support the image caption's claim of Rentor being his homeworld.Imperators II(Talk) 10:05, 6 April 2023 (UTC)- all done — i'm unsure if the referencing for the erroneous mention in the BTS is acceptable, though BloodOfIrizi(Syndicure) 17:19, 6 April 2023 (UTC)
- all done — i'm unsure if the referencing for the erroneous mention in the BTS is acceptable, though BloodOfIrizi
Comments
Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 14:24, 12 April 2023 (UTC)