Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Regump

< Wookieepedia:Good article nominations
The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Regump

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:10, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The latest Mace Windu comic was an odd little story that I'm not quite sure the purpose of, but here's a few nominations from it
  • Date Archived: 13:50, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 573 words (92 introduction, 419 body, 62 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 589 words (92 introduction, 448 body, 49 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Comics

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

(Votes required: No additional votes required to pass, please consider reviewing another article.)

Support

  1. Wok142 (talk) 18:21, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Lewisr (talk) 19:36, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
  3. ACvote —spookywillowwtalk 18:46, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
  4. Xd1358 (Talk) 15:34, 18 July 2024 (UTC)
  5. ACvote Zed42 Wolfpack emblem (talk) 13:49, 20 July 2024 (UTC)

Object

Wok
  • Currently skeleton key seems to be different from what is in this comic. Do you think the item in the comic needs its own page? Wok142 (talk) 00:24, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
    • The skeleton key page should probably cover the general concept of skeleton keys rather than DJ's specific one, but double checking the comics there is actually a specific name for this one so made a new page and linked to that. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:22, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
      • Excellent. Wok142 (talk) 18:21, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
ecks
  • Parts of the article are really play-by-play, being basically word-by-word recounts of dialogue. "Asking for Regump's name again" and Windu explaining how steam works are notable examples. I'd remove it myself but I'm afraid I'd leave sentence fragments behind, so I'll leave it to you.
  • There are at least some sentences in the bio where I feel the article could benefit from a rewrite to make Regump the subject of a sentence, for example Regump being ordered by Windu rather than Windu ordering Regump. Xd1358 (Talk) 17:32, 17 July 2024 (UTC)
    • Done a bit of rewording, how's it look now on both counts? Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:05, 17 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 13:49, 20 July 2024 (UTC)