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Rashi

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:43, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Those in the server may have noticed that [redacted[ and I were nerding out about this guy, since Rashi is probably the greatest scholar in Jewish history and had one of the greatest impacts on all sects/denominations of Judaism out of any rabbi pretty much ever
  • Date Archived: 08:01, 23 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 625 words (102 introduction, 498 body, 25 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 586 words (68 introduction, 494 body, 24 behind the scenes)
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(4 ACs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. ACvote LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 10:39, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
  2. AxMech (talk) 20:24, 14 February 2023 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:31, 17 February 2023 (UTC)
  4. ACvote Provided Ayre's objection is addressed.—spookywillowwtalk 15:14, 7 March 2023 (UTC)
  5. Moved Equipment quote to P&T as a better fit from my perspective. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 17:39, 20 March 2023 (UTC)
  6. ACvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:00, 23 March 2023 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • Could you maybe briefly explain why the Empire was trying to capture Brasso?
  • You mention "Rashi's ruse," but I don't see any ruse explained in the article. Was confusing the Imperials Rashi's plan? (The intro is a bit clearer about this than the body). LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 17:03, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
Braha
  • Can you expand on the last paragraph in the bio? The honor guard was very much involved in the riot, though it's hard to make out faces, and Rashi can be seen helping someone just after Wilmon gets confronted by stormtroopers. It'd also be good to specify why the troopers were specifically going for Wilmon, which also relates to why Rashi was helping that civilian in the brief shot I mentioned. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:48, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Audio description specifies that Wilmon used a pipe bomb.
    • Nice, added.
  • I think it should be noted that Brasso and Wilmon fled Ferrix without Rashi. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 18:35, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
  • In reckoning (circa 10:45), there's a short moment where Rashi comments on the arrival of North Team. And later he's seen behind Brasso among a number of grapplers that are "moving into action" according to the audio description. These definitely look notable for the article. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 01:14, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
  • I don't think Maarva's species is that necessary for this article. Her position as Cassian's mother is fine enough. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 00:56, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Removed - there's now no context for Maarva in the intro but that should be fine. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:04, 5 February 2023 (UTC)
      • Added "woman" as context for her in the intro. It's shorter than trying to add on that she's Andor's mother and arguably consistent with "mother" in the body as well. And for the sake of context it looks better than "human" imo. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 22:31, 17 February 2023 (UTC)
AxMech
  • The intro lacks a mention of Rashi being a member of the honor guard and that his participation in the funeral was under this capacity.
  • Short context about grappling? Eg "while going to work dismantling a Venator-class destroyer"... AxMech (talk) 13:21, 1 February 2023 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • You can now update the article to use the pronouns field and categories. You should also check if Rashi's gender is confirmed now that we're not assuming gender from pronouns. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:12, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • I'd move the current bio image down to the third paragraph and then add another image to the first paragraph that fits chronologically. You might also be able to fit an image into the equipment section, especially if it's the width and height of a full uncropped screenshot. Perhaps the funeral outfit? Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:12, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
    • Good point on the image placement, but I am unable to take D+ screenshots right now. If you would mind uploading one of Rashi from Reckoning (~10:45) I'd appreciate it - and if there's one you know of that would fit in the Equipment section that would be great, but I'm not 100% sure it can really fit one as it is right now.
      • Sure thing, I'll try and grab some screenshots shortly. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:30, 10 February 2023 (UTC)
  • I'd say it's worth mentioning Maarva's speech at the funeral since Rashi and all the others watched it. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:12, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
  • I think that the intro should be expanded based on the article length, I'd suggest mentioning the salvage yard and the riot at the funeral with him helping Wilmon. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:26, 27 February 2023 (UTC)
    • Gave it a little more. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:56, 7 March 2023 (UTC)
      • Hmm, I think Ideally I'd like to see it as tw short paragraphs given the current length. If you add a sentence about him being in the yard when the corpos arrive then that should be enough to split it and also mean that it doesn't feel like the intro just skips to the very end of the bio. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:21, 9 March 2023 (UTC)

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