- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a good article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Raid on the SIS safe house
- Nominated by: Cade
Calrayn 17:31, May 15, 2014 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Project Hero. I'll get a better image soon.
(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Adressed via IRC. Clone Commander Lee Talk 21:05, May 26, 2014 (UTC)
- 501st dogma(talk) 15:46, June 9, 2014 (UTC)
YOU'RE WINNER ! Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:46, June 10, 2014 (UTC)- As long as you get a better image.--Exiled Jedi
(Greetings) 00:20, June 16, 2014 (UTC) - IFYLOFD (Enter the Floydome) 04:29, June 28, 2014 (UTC)
Object
Lee's charge
You say "many" agents were killed in the outcome section, but in the casualties section there are only "several". Which one is more correct?Could you make it a little bit clearer that Galen did not willingly give the information to Sadic?Maybe the staff of the "cover shop" as civilian casualties?I'm unsure about the number of Power Guards involved. Are you sure that there were only three?- Clone Commander Lee Talk 21:00, May 15, 2014 (UTC)
501st
Was it a squad of Power Guards or 3 that assaulted the SIS house? The body has a squad doing it while the infobox has 3.501st dogma(talk) 22:42, June 4, 2014 (UTC)
Toprawa
Last BTS paragraph. "They" cannot be used as a pronoun for the singular "player." Please rewrite. You could alternatively use the plural "players."Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 21:21, June 10, 2014 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
More of a question, but is there any way you could get a better image?You don't really say that Galen was tortured in the body. You hint at it, but you never say it.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:33, June 15, 2014 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 04:29, June 28, 2014 (UTC)