Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Raid on the Forsaken Den

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Raid on the Forsaken Den

  • Nominated by: Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 01:37, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: The Bladewielder's rather badass, for a freaky Flesh Raider.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ACvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:10, July 26, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 13:36, July 26, 2012 (UTC)
  3. ACvote CC7567 (talk) 05:58, August 14, 2012 (UTC)
  4. ACvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:29, August 14, 2012 (UTC)
  5. Winterz (talk) 04:04, August 16, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Exiled Jedi
  • Could you add another sentence to beef-up the introduction?
    • Done.
  • You might want to mention Laotah's experience in the Forskaen Den in the preview section and then include his meeting with the apprentice in the Attacking the caves section.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 04:06, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
Cav
  • successful raid on the Flesh Raiders' command base - articles for raid and the command base? - Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 20:11, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
    • Si, senorita. Done. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 15:48, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
  • {{Fact}} tag in the infobox.
    • Sorry, do you mean the unsourced line? That's fixed, but I don't see any actual {{fact}} tags anywhere.
      • Apologies; meant to add a tag. :P CC7567 (talk) 08:09, August 12, 2012 (UTC)
  • Please fix the stuff that I mentioned about the proper usage of †.
    • Fixed.
  • Please fix the linking in the infobox.
    • Fixed.
  • In the future, all of the above should be fixed by the time an article gets nominated, whether it be for the FAN or GAN. I'll review once these are done. I would highly recommend taking some time to go through the article again to double-check everything. CC7567 (talk) 00:11, August 11, 2012 (UTC)
    • Not meant as an excuse, but more of an explanation: the last few articles were written one or two months ago, before I learned how to fix all of these objections, and I unfortunately have not touched them since. They've been sitting in a queue waiting to be put on the GAN page, and I failed to update and/or rectify errors in them during that time. I'll try to ensure similar issues don't happen in the future. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 02:45, August 12, 2012 (UTC)
      • That's fine; I understand. Writing articles is always a learning experience, and it's important to make sure that writing always reflects what one's learning. The important thing is to learn to recognize errors so that they don't persist in the future. CC7567 (talk) 08:09, August 12, 2012 (UTC)
  • One more before I begin: please check that quotation marks always follow punctuation. CC7567 (talk) 08:09, August 12, 2012 (UTC)
  • The event is called a raid, but the Mission infobox is being used. Please rectify this inconsistency somehow.
    • Well, in my opinion, it's both. The player is sent on a mission to raid the Forsaken Den and destroy the base. Do you still think it should be fixed?
      • Giving it more thought, it should be fine. CC7567 (talk) 05:58, August 14, 2012 (UTC)
  • Please make sure that the section naming follows the Layout Guide. Authorial license is fine, but there's other places for it. CC7567 (talk) 23:16, August 12, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 18:03, August 19, 2012 (UTC)