Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Raid on the Flesh Raider weapons cache

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Raid on the Flesh Raider weapons cache

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 17:35, June 2, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Now that I have access to TOR again, time to continue Project Hero.

(3 ACs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Looks good. Please note that you have to only link to an article once in the infobox. 501st dogma^(talk) 16:06, June 7, 2012 (UTC)
2. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 18:24, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
3. Good work.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 19:35, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
4. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:02, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
5. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 02:17, July 9, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Cav

• Shouldn't the light side template be after "The Raid" heading?
  • Bah humbug!
• For every one of us the Flesh Raiders butcher, we should ten! - is there a missing word at the end of the sentence here? Or is it correct to the source? - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:47, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
  • Woops. Cade Calrayn 13:35, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Return of the Jedi

• The Prelude is not fully sourced.
  • Fixed.
• Please be more careful in the future when it comes to formatting. I've noticed what appears to be lazy formatting that I've had to fix. Please keep an eye on this in the future.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 19:09, June 18, 2012 (UTC)
  • Alrighty, spaces in the ref tags it is (and other stuff). Gotcha. Cade Calrayn 19:31, June 18, 2012 (UTC)

Floyd:

• Intro: Context on the Flesh Raiders and their uprising.
  • Done.
• Intro: Context on Ranna Tao'ven.
  • Done.
• In the body, context is also needed on the Flesh Raiders.
  • Done.
• Context on the Tythonian Gnarls.
  • Done.
• The intro mentions a specific Flesh Raider uprising, but I don't see anything about an uprising in the body.
  • Done.
• IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 03:30, July 1, 2012 (UTC)
  • Is this an objection? :P Cade Calrayn 16:48, July 5, 2012 (UTC)

Exiled Jedi

• Shouldn't there be an article for the weapon cache or at least one for the base they had it at?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:35, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
  • It's just the Upper Hollows. The class phase is a short tunnel with an even smaller mini-cave at the end. Cade Calrayn 02:24, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
    • I must be thinking of another quest.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:02, July 7, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 02:17, July 9, 2012 (UTC)