Wookieepedia:Good article nominations/Quiyyen

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Quiyyen

• Nominated by: JangFett ^(Talk) 01:25, February 1, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I guess a continuation of the Badass Grievous noms. :P

(5 ACs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Hey Jang!—Tommy 9281 Thursday, February 3, 2011, 07:15 UTC
2. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 20:15, February 5, 2011 (UTC)
3. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:25, February 5, 2011 (UTC)
4. 1358 ^(Talk) 21:33, February 5, 2011 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:33, February 6, 2011 (UTC)
6. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 21:12, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Twin

• The intro needs to be rewritten from Quiyyen's POV.
• When the page first loaded the image gave me the impression the article was about the Human. Are there no better depictions at all?
• That's all.—Tommy ⁹²⁸¹ 23:37, February 1, 2011 (UTC)
  • I made some adjustments to the intro, hope that's good. As for the image, that's the only clear shot of him in the comic. I cropped the image a little to focus on him, rather than the dude behind him. Thanks, Tommy. JangFett ^(Talk) 03:28, February 3, 2011 (UTC)
    • No problem homie.—Tommy 9281 Thursday, February 3, 2011, 07:15 UTC

Cav

• Related to Tommy's objection on the main image - full speech bubbles should still have the text inside them. Of course, this only applies if the image is left as it is and not changed or cropped to satisfy Tommy's objection. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:00, February 2, 2011 (UTC)
  • Since I cropped it, I left the box blank. Hope that's sufficient. JangFett ^(Talk) 03:28, February 3, 2011 (UTC)

Qui-yen

• Per the MOS, ranks and titles should be capitalized if they are referring to the people. This is further supported by the lead quote, which capitalizes 'Ambassador'.
• That's all. Nice work, Jang. 1358 ^(Talk) 13:45, February 5, 2011 (UTC)
  • Addressed; thanks, Xd. JangFett ^(Talk) 19:42, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moffship

• No quote for the bio?
• Good work, as always. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 20:07, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Toprawa

• Should "master" not be capped in the bio quote caption? I don't understand the "Master" capitalization myself, but this seems like an applicable case.
• No skin color infobox field data? Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:18, February 6, 2011 (UTC)
  • Both address; thanks for the review, Tope. :) JangFett ^(Talk) 05:31, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Good article by AgriCorps 21:14, February 6, 2011 (UTC)